С днём рождения!!!! Желаю тебе счастья и здоровья
ch 69 Chapter- 66 Reward
Anime & Comics · 6_SHINIGAMI_9
Было бы хорошо если бы он знал
А какой следующий мир?
ch 0 3 Judgement's Day
Video Games · RealityEldritch101
Мне очень интересна реакция других переселенцев на его имя
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - The Storm Dragon/Goblins & Direwolves
Anime & Comics · AyanoChibi
А можно на звание?
ch 38 To be strong and weak
Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn
А от куда она?
ch 38 To be strong and weak
Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn
Please let it be Hestia
I pray that Alaya and Gaia will help your wife.
ch 35 35. Abomination
Anime & Comics · greenbaypitbull
Hello, the author liked the idea, but there are flaws in the letter if you fix them, it will be easier for people to read. For example, make more digressions, otherwise it's hard to read large paragraphs.Also, make more descriptions (of water) in the text and even when other characters think, write p-s on his behalf or attribute who said or thought it, otherwise it is not clear whose thoughts and speech it is. In general, when other characters speak or think, or the authors usually write from them in a different paragraph, so it's easier to understand who is talking or when the last one finished speaking. But you probably already know this, because when you read others, you can see how the author wrote and what tricks he used and gain experience due to this. Good luck starting your writing career[img=recommend]. (Google Translator)
ch 0 1 1 Orleans : summoning
Anime & Comics · francis_suttijit
Siduri
ch 11 | Poll for the Harem |
Anime & Comics · Gilgamesh_Official
Удачи
ch 0 8 Maybe no chap tmrrw.
Anime & Comics · Daoist764038
Автор не бросай
ch 47 Origin Sword
Anime & Comics · Dragon15681
Я думаю, либо перегрузку клеток, либо высокую бодрость, ведь криптонцы поглощают солнце для зарядки себя.
ch 0 1 / Chapter 01: A God's Descent \
DC: Sun God Reborn
Anime & Comics · Gilgamesh_Official