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I hope you return soon. Thanks for the story thus far and thanks for notifying us.

Thanks for the quick update. Keep them coming.

Thanks for the quick update. keep writing.

Great going. Thanks for the chapter. Can't wait for the moon god wedding chapter. Keep writing.

Good to see you posting again. Your memory have become a little rusty. You changed the Glazzed light realm to light gaze realm. Nonetheless, it was a decent chapter. Keep writing.

Great chapter and an amazing 1st volume. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep writing

Thanks for the quick update. Keep writing.

Good going. The story is getting better and interesting. Can't wait to read more of it. Keep writing and thanks for the quick update.

keep up the great work.

Great chapter. Can't wait for more. Update fast.

It was an amazing chapter. keep up the good work and keep writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

The extra chapters were a pleasant surprise. Thanks for the chapters and I didn't read your last statement and I don't remember it 😁 so keep up the same pace.

Chapter was good. Short, but good nonetheless. I am just dying to read the chapters about the moon god realm. If he will choose to go to star god realm or moon god realm as a reward for 1st position. Honestly it would be logical to go to moon god realm because he can meet Jasmine any time now and I think he would be more desperate for going to moon god realm and meeting Xia quingyue. Plus he can heal her mother which is more plausible since she died in original version. Anyway, disregard my ramblings if they influence your writing in a negative way. But if you think of a more interesting storyline after reading this you can incorporate them in your writing. As always, keep writing.

Great chapter. Already waiting for the next one. Keep writing.

This one is better. The characters feels more original with their true nature. Previously it felt like yun che has secretly planted a slave imprint in Luo changsheng and they were putting up a play in front of everyone with rainbow and sunshine all around.Thanks for the chapter. keep improving and keep writing.

I think it is due to the blood from his deceased biological father who was a clone of the person from the abyss who saved yun che briefly described in previous chapter 18.

I don't understand how can Luo changsheng have divine sovereign cultivation. Yun che could only become divine sovereign because of no bottleneck and law of nothingness but Luo changsheng does not have them so it is completely absurd that he became a divine sovereign. You better give a good enough explanation because this chapter is completely ridiculous otherwise.

What a cliffhanger! Just how much did you raise his cultivation for a reaction like that? Looking forward to the next chapter. The wait is unbearable now after such a cliffhanger.

Thanks bro for the amazing chapter. I Just wanted to ask if you have already thought out the complete plotline or are you writing as you go along because it would be really sad if you kept us hanging in the future. Keep writing.

Liked the fast updates. Keep them coming.