While I do like that something’s happening in these chapters, I feel that the pacing might be too slow. Not enough is happening. Not saying that the story is bad, I’m just saying that it feels as if it’s stagnant. It’s supposed to be a kingdom building-esque story. But there’s barely any kingdom building or relationship with Nero. I get it, you can cook. But maybe turn up the heat a little more yeah? I see promise in this story. That’s why I’m saying all this. Thanks for the chapter.
ch 18 Roman Empress Prepares For War, Before Leaving Local Man Alone To Babysit
Anime & Comics · Cythiano
Soup.
ch 11 Local Man Suddenly Questions Xinxia Protagonists
Anime & Comics · Cythiano
Keep going. Keep the world building going and you’ll see that you have a solid foundation! Dont forget the small details with Kingdom building.
ch 0 9 Local Man Get's A Little Too Devious For His Own Good
Anime & Comics · Cythiano
He likes The Climb.
"Did you know, of those two words, 'like' is the most important to him?" The Phoenix Force did not respond. "He doesn't want to be god. He doesn't want to be perfect or all-powerful. He wants the struggle. The failure. He likes his limits, even when they frustrate him. It means he is still mortal. He is still him."
Anime & Comics · ReadingDangerously
It’s like hair. Pretty hard to stretch out but easy to cut.
The funny thing about superhuman women in high heels is that surprisingly they have good traction and are viable in a fight due to the fact that with enough force they can force said heel into the ground and use it for leverage in swinging their swords and such but I will never understand how they can sprint upstairs wearing the things though.
Video Games · Azazyel
Hey, the ocean is vast and there must be other characters that can be used. If not, the author can come up with others. Don’t make the Protagonist beg Glenn for help. Let the protagonist have some backbone.
ch 60 Chapter 59. Nothing Comes Easy For a Villain
Anime & Comics · Me_Writer
Some of them have fruit powers that are problematic. Therefore in order to not run the risk of having the fruit pop up again then they just imprison the people in this forgotten floor and let them live out their lives.
But the Marines were also brain-dead, why didn't they kill this kind of threat?
Anime & Comics · StaringCat
Unbelievable, just how much power does Adam have?
ch 238 Temporal Piece
Anime & Comics · Over_The_Moon69
How am I supposed to tell emotion when he has a mask on his face?(sarcasm)
"I already had great stories, in the form of my books. I thought, how do I scale it further? It's a fact that not everyone loves reading books. So, how do I reach out to the ones that dont, how do I reach out to the bigger audience?" Mark asked himself, despite the mask, he was able to express and articulate himself quite well.
Movies · TheRamenLord
It’s just sad at this point.
"L-Let me have your virile seed,"
Anime & Comics · Over_The_Moon69
Since Sia-Lan had just "raised a flag" as Van would say if he were present.
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
The grind and the climb never end.
The grind is eternal.
Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn
'I refuse' I said in my head as I moved away from the place
Anime & Comics · Yasashiki
Smart man that one. Only doing his job and nothing more.
"Why am I bothering myself with such thoughts? I'm merely a vulture, responsible only for collecting corpses..." Charlie concluded his thoughts.
Movies · The_Book_Addict
You can’t have peace unless you have the biggest guns. Otherwise nobody is gonna treat you right.
"For me, it's not really about winning or losing. I just want to survive. I want to have a happy life. I want a peaceful life. Seeking peace of mind is my ultimate goal."
Anime & Comics · akikan40
Jake still got that dawg in ’im
ch 104 Chapter 99
Video Games · Azazyel
You don't need chakra to stand toe-to-toe with the best. The Flames of Youth will do just fine.
Naruto bowed towards Lee and Gai, after he wore back his weights and prepared to leave. He turned back towards Lee with a smile on his face, "You can defeat Neji, Lee, you already possess the ability to do so…"
Anime & Comics · Indie131998
We do not negotiate with terrorists.
"I'm sorry, I don't accept surrender."
Movies · Novelette_Seeker
While I’m all for a good wish fulfillment, there comes a point where you have to get the story moving. I get that the main character is WEAK at the moment and his summons are restricted to their own respective strengths with no chance for growth, you have to get the chapters moving. At least 1000 words long with actual content beyond “choose from these three options.” I do not have enough content or story/plot to give this story a rating. While the voting aspect is cool, getting a solid foundation before asking for votes is important. Good luck with the story.
My OP Summoning System
Anime & Comics · The_Procrastinator