Webnovel Author: RasyaHelion - Novel Collection

Early review here. Looking at the prologue, the tone seemed quite dark. Fans of those types of stories would like this. Grammar is quite fine with only minor issues, though some words are somewhat hard to understand. Still very early, however, hope the author will improve as the chapters progress more. Keep it up!

Thanks for the review. Author here. Yes, the tone of the early chapters is pretty lighthearted, but later on, there will be some serious and heavy moments as well. 9 chapters were pretty early! The main conflict can get pretty brutal as shown in the prologue.

The protagonist is so relatable, although the dialogue is a tad a bit too silly in my opinion. A good concept overall, and the story is very much fast-paced.

Well, well. I usually ain't one to view a book with heavy romance, but this one seems interesting. First, the good points: The world-building is top-class. Descriptive words conveyed what the setting is truly like. I like the royal atmosphere and this story allows me to experience that. Next, the not-so-good ones: I feel like many of the paragraphs are too long, and there are many punctuation errors. While the grammar is good, there are also too many repetitive pronouns. Still worth the read in my opinion. Check it out.