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info dumps are blocks of text to explain world whereas world building is a scene where magic happens to show that there is magic without explaining anythinv or a character looks at a picture or something without explaining it

On paper this looks like a typical harem overpowered feel good type of series, but I realized that this series is well though out. The lemons are some of the most detailed scenes ive read. I came here looking for PLOT and what I got is an amazing story with great characters that felt real.grammar wise, its easy to read and there are some misspelled words here and there or punctuation. you wont find stephen king levels of writting here but deffinitely above average you can find in this site

Alright, I think I have enough for a first impression. Honestly I was blown awat by the attention to detail the author wrote. The characters really pops in your mind as how they look like. The dialogue is amazing, nothing feels forced and the characters will say something in character, i know many novels that have characters that are just there for the sake if plot explanation. But here, you can tell whos talking even without the tags because they have certain quirks in their dialogue. the main selling point for me is the MC, Rhen. There are alot of characters that have stoic assassin leads, but what happens is that they tend to be cringe or too edgy. But the MC in this series can be the most cold blooded MF or the most funniest character that I read. i think he's a more mature version of like kazami yuuji from grisaia. there are "choices" in the novel, but the author gets to chose them, i feel like im watching someone play an eroge game than reading a novel. Author kun is this a game?