Badges 38
Moments 230
Specifically after FBI funded “honey traps” & “reverse honey traps”. Sex/love entrapment with 10 Black Guys. Yes, specific.
ch 0 1 Hacker Queen Becomes a High School Student
National School Prince Is A Girl
Teen · Warring Young Seven
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 0 1 The Desire To Live
Abyssal Awakening
Fantasy · Reili
Me too. I burst out talking outlook at that point. “23, and acts mature for her age?”, or “Mature because she has 3 kids and has been solo parenting since age 15 while renting her families garage - i. e. the hard way to grow up while discovering family values??”
"23-year-old mature woman, gentle and intellectual, wants to be controlled by a big brother with a Class~"
Forgemaster: My Legendary Weapons Turn Max Level Automatically
Urban · jinx
Ugh! Grab an Editor, ASAP! (Consider one of your first published sentence fragments, incomplete and crossing into another paragraph for possible starting points.) As for the story itself, Lin doesn’t recall when/how he transmigrated?! Was he two or younger? And is he currently 12 (one reference) or 18? Is he looking forward to being tested, based on one section, or recovering & implementing a fallback plan after failing, based on another? I’m confused, at least about this story. 1/5 Stars in present state, based on Chapter One.
ch 0 1 Day of Awakening
Forgemaster: My Legendary Weapons Turn Max Level Automatically
Urban · jinx
And we likely start developing it while in the womb …
ch 0 4 The Oracle System (part 2)
The Oracle Paths
Sci-fi · Arkinslize
Why die tired & panic’d?
ch 0 2 Global panic
The Oracle Paths
Sci-fi · Arkinslize
He can't even apply for Journeyman yet. Needs 3+ more solo designed mechs, plus gains on his style/dev model.
ch 572 Harkensen System
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
I never understand why you guys thank him for chapters, especially as this novel craters.
ch 564 Suppressed
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
> doesn't deserve top 50.. Which equates to top 10,000+ on any reasonable platform, such as Amazon. I hope it's his contract clauses sinking his ship; he was slowly becoming a better writer. Sadly, I had purchased chapters way ahead so likely will read through 1,000 but I'm not investing more or voting for or recommendding this book unless it improves DRAMATICALLY.
ch 564 Suppressed
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
For the people skipping chapters, obviously! Feel like an idiot now? (instead of merely looking the part)
ch 563 Horde
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
Yes. Author retconning the world/system for a mild fight scene, a result achievable by other means.
ch 562 Turnaround
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
If the aother does something with this new character, who I’m ipressed with besides just assassinate her as a mini-boss, it wouldn’t be filler.
ch 560 Sic Semper Pirata
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
Just smart enough to feed the machines, mainly.
Having heard about it from others, she knew that the machine tested something funny called genes. It was said that genes were long strips of strings, and if they wound up just the right way, you became a bigshot that other people called a potentate!
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
Me too. The writing, the plotting, the lack of consistency with the original character/etc. designs! This would have been FAILED by my midddle-school English writing instructor.
It was a wonderfully effective and intricate armor system that required weeks of fabrication work just to produce a complete set. It was also fairly affordable for the level of protection it afforded. If not for its propensity for faults, it would have been more widespread.
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
Yet hasn't yet transferred it to Iris, & likely won’t by his own admittance.
"Hmph. The only reason why he dragged his corpse out of his hibernation chamber is because the Gorgon's Gaze is one of the ships that lost their sub-light propulsion. If not for that, he would probably be the first person to suggest we split and run. The Venerable is selfish to the bone."
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
Look up the scientific/medical references.
ch 0 4 The Oracle System (part 2)
The Oracle Paths
Sci-fi · Arkinslize