This is not the correct book
Redo: grimoire system in the apocalypse
ch 27 0 TO 100
Sci-fi · Festus_Darko_1226
The way the fight is orchestrated makes it confusing
ch 0 9 Battle with the unknown
Sci-fi · Maddox_Amalattey
A lot of things are confusing about this chapter
ch 0 9 Battle with the unknown
Sci-fi · Maddox_Amalattey
What do you mean
ch 24 JOHN'S AWAKENING
Sci-fi · Festus_Darko_1226
If the crystal was red and it touched Darku's hand why was Darko burning. He would have gotten fire resistance as his element would switch to fire due to the crystal being red. Is that a mistake or on purpose.
ch 0 7 IT'S TIME TO SHOW HIM WHAT I'M MADE OF
Sci-fi · Maddox_Amalattey
Why does the enemy name sound so familiar
ch 0 6 Don't Wanna
Sci-fi · Maddox_Amalattey
Great story but the fights are too short
ch 0 2 HMMM INTERESTING
Sci-fi · Maddox_Amalattey
I don't mean to be rude but did you intentionally make those mistakes or did you genuinely not realize you were making mistakes, because how, the punctuation marks are wrong, some sentences are connected with other sentences they shouldn't be connected to and finally a lot of the words in the chapter are spelt wrongly, please fix these issues in your next chapter and try improving the story itself a little more, overall, the chapter didn't do that well.
ch 0 1 CHAPTER 1
THE Time Thief
Urban · kataali