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I started reading this story and enjoyed it at first but now I’m dropping it. While I am able to overlook the incorrect use of pronouns for the most part, the inconsistencies regarding the characters names is off putting. I would rather have the translator spend more time editing their work than to waste time on thinking up westernized names.

For a short story, this was nicely done. I think the key point was that wIthout communication and honesty, a relationship isn’t going to make it. It’s not going to be solid enough to withstand the challenges that come with life. This is a slice of life story that focuses on our male leads and not much else so if you’re looking for something light to read, this is a nice story to pass the time.

For a rebirth novel, this was a pretty decent story. The FL was pretty normal, all things considered, and while she became an ace sharpshooter it was a primarily through hardwork. Also, I appreciated that she wasn’t brilliant at everything. On the other hand, the ML was the classic, rich, OCD (for a second), domineering, problem solving type….but he wasn ’t too annoying. LoL. Probably because sometimes he’d disappear for a few chapters. They had a relationship, made out, snuck around, went out to eat, did things separately … all pretty “normal”. As far as the revenge drama goes, the FL eventually realizes that she can ’t do it all on her own, which is a departure from most rebirth novels. Usually, she’d take the high road and/or tough out the situation in the beginning, but later ML would come in and deal with her enemies anyways. And honestly her rebirth didn’t give her much of an advantage- while going to the military helped, it didn’t stop everything from happening. Lastly, long novels like this have a lot of characters and details that often lead nowhere. So don’t think too hard and just be entertained. 😉

The summary was a lot more light hearted than the actual story. While there were plenty of li ght moments, there were also lots of scenes that were worth trigger warnings. The story made me think of a soap opera, courtesy of the many side characters, but the main couple stayed strong from beginning to end. And yes, the son was a cutey ❤️