Webnovel Author: Beyond_the_wall - Novel Collection

It's a good one Author , can't wait for more !!

Hello everyone, I am the author of this novel. I am pretty much fluent in English and so there won't be any problem in reading.The story is about Su Chenyu trying to find answers regarding the mysterious surrounding the system and the dream he saw. I have tried to keep the story interesting and no nonsense will be there . I hope you guys enjoy it. Please consider commenting, and leaving reviews and adding it to the collections if you like it. I will be writing 2 chapters daily and will try my best not to disappoint you . Thankyou 😃

The Story so far is really good, Can't wait to read more 👍

oh please author, no matter what explanation you give , the fact is that YanEr and her sisters all didn't want to be near MC when he was weak , now that he revealed that he's strong , only then that she's wanting to know her past. What's the difference between them and his original fiance ? Both didn't want mc when he was weak , only when he's strong did they come bruh . The chu suiyan girl is MUCH MUCH MUCH BETTER

The story is written in such a way that it seems a 6 yr old kid wrote it from his fantasies . I swear no grown up can have such rubbish imagination. 1) the mc is famous for his cultivation and his literary skills, everyone in the royal palace praises him , everyone knows he's extremely powerful and has defeated extremely powerful villains within seconds, BUT according to the author his wife , who's the empress of that empire is unaware of it.....bruh.... 2) the story is idiotic, system literary gives him cultivation, techniques and makes him overpowered just by taking care of his daughters.....literally mc takes 0 risk . he doesn't even cultivate at all , nor does he learn techniques or anything, everything is done by system just by him taking care of his daughter.......like mc makes food for daughter2 , he gets 500 yrs of cultivation......seriously???? what's the logic???? other system novels at least have logic that mc killed and absorbed their energy, or he gets their fate energy or mc gets the yin energy by dual cultivation or mc changes fate of world and gets fate energy or mc absorbs energy from energy sources.........what do our mc do? he tells a story to his daughter and gets 1000 yrs of cultivation 3) the dialogs .....oh my God, kill me . Any 15 yr old kid with a little common sense can write better than that. Read 5-6 chapters and u will understand 4) mc is boring, very boring, he takes care of daughter, gets stronger , kills his enemies who come to assassinate, and then he ignores his wife ( literally untill the end of the story) , he doesn't say anything to her except what's necessary . To sum it up , if u want to increase your mental strength by reading something that will make u want to kill the author and kill yourself, read it . and webnovel, seriously bro it's time you stop allowing such idiotic novels to even exist , the app has become full of garbage, do something

and can u please reduce those explanations or even better omit the useless ones.....

dear author, it's an awesome story and everything is top notch but seriously , after reading 130 chapters I have to say , do u think we are small kindergarten kids ????? why the f**k do u have to give so much explanation for every single action ???? can't u write in short???? and why does eren have to give so long explanations for every single of his actions ?? for example - during the time he went to Amazon with Ken and their master , he attacked the girl with bombs because they ambushed them . now why the f**k does he have to give such a long bullshit explanation as to why he did that ... AND I SWEAR TO GOD I WILL GO CRAZY IF I READ THE PHRASE " PLEASE ALLOW ME TO EXPLAIN " !!

it's an awesome story...no doubt one of the best stories on the entire website......possibly the best I ever read and I have read a lot