KritoMage

1yr

Commented

a girl? how he supposed to know it? o.o

Touching the tips of their swords, they both looked into each other's eyes for the last time before the fight, and as if knowing that she was a girl, Wei let her strike first.

The Voyage in the Blizzard

Fantasy · Leon Kingraph

KritoMage

1yr

Commented

a previous chapter with original names, but a better version, i like it more

"So this is my little place where I can be myself." Yue-Liang lighted up the candles and reached out his hand to Longwei. "Here, let me help you. It is a bit slippery here."

The Voyage in the Blizzard

Fantasy · Leon Kingraph

KritoMage

1yr

Commented

so, well... Leiandros seems to be a Lei, Leidolf is his brother. Author, is it possible to fix the names in this chapter? I and future readers would appreciate it very much, thank you in advance!

“Brother let’s go now,” Leidolf said. Looking at him suspiciously he asked, “Are you alright?”

The Voyage in the Blizzard

Fantasy · Leon Kingraph

KritoMage

1yr

Commented

just totally confused, is Draken a Longwei? Did all charachters become new names just for one chapter?

After that happy incident in the canteen everyone led Longwei towards the house of the head of the First clan.

The Voyage in the Blizzard

Fantasy · Leon Kingraph

KritoMage

1yr

Commented

agree, who are they?

Following Leidolf, Draken was thinking about what happened after the fight between him and the beast. Thinking about it over and over again made him feel himself uncomfortable next to Leiandros. He couldn’t look at him. He was ignoring the hidden happiness in the corner of his heart, like it was a mistake. But he knew that he was longing for it. He was searching for Leiandros. And now when he was walking behind of him, Draken wanted to hide, he wanted to run away and live in that cave for the rest of his life.