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ch 66 Chapter 66: Coup Unveiled & Monstrous Showdown
DC: I am Bruce Wayne
Anime & Comics · God_Doom
Crock?
"Let's just get on our separate ways..." A man covered in green scales shrugged, "There's nothing for us here anymore... Penguin is dead... Falcone is dead... Black Mask is dead..."
Batman x Arc Reactor
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
don't interfere
"Don't do it. You will become a murderer..." Thomas grabbed his son's hand again, despite the sparks, "I don't want my son to walk the same path I have walked once..."
Batman x Arc Reactor
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
do it
"I gave up on revenge after I heard you were dead, but you just had to come out before my eyes again... Threatening my family again... Trying to harm them again... Fuck!" Bruce grabbed Falcone's neck and choked him, "You shouldn't have done that... You should have stayed in your little hiding hole. But don't you worry... I'll make sure to squeeze every ounce of suffering you made me go through... Out of you..."
Batman x Arc Reactor
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
let it all out
All his hatred, anger, resentment... Every negative emotion he locked deep inside his heart exploded all at once. Bruce was venting out all his frustrations.
Batman x Arc Reactor
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
Kill that motherfu**er. Beat him to death.
Bruce kicked Falcone in the stomach making him spit out blood.
Batman x Arc Reactor
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
You can not avoid negative comments no matter what you do, someone will always complain. And if you take everyone's opinions, you won't be able to write everything to satisfy everyone's preferences. So, instead of rewriting, just tweak certain chapters with grammar problems. In the end, it's your book, do what you think is the best instead of asking the readers. They will always say, rewrite,s since they want to read something new everytime. There are very few who reads till the end. Most leaves in the midway. Good Luck.
While the overall plot will probably remain the same, I'm considering tweaking certain elements and making details clearer to avoid negative or unfounded comments.
Rewrite! DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan
Anime & Comics · Demon_King22
Elana blinked and appeared behind Talia. Her movement was so fast that the trained assassins didn't even catch it. Her left arm circled Talia's neck, the blade pressed against her throat. She slightly leaned over, "Whatever you do, don't even think of looking toward the Waynes..."
Batman x Arc Reactor
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
"That's why..." He took out a handgun and placed it under his chin, tears flowing freely as he gazed at Elana. "Don't tell Lily that her dad was a coward... Please..." With these words, he pulled the trigger, splattering blood and brain matter across the floor.
Batman x Arc Reactor
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
It's just an expression. Hahaha.
"Let me lube it up for you," He leaned in pushing his face between her butt cheeks licking her puckered hole. Selina moaned softly as Bruce licked her ass crack. His tongue swirled around her hole before plunging inside. He lapped hungrily at her asshole, savoring her sweet taste. He reached around and began massaging her clit as he ate her ass. She gripped his hair tightly as she bucked against his mouth. Her juices dripped down his chin, "Well, that's wet enough..."
Batman x Arc Reactor
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Peaceful New Life
Danmachi: Divine Enemy
Anime & Comics · Khay_Cee_Padua
It is at this moment, they didn't realise, they fkd up.
"KILL WHO?" He ripped his Adam's apple out, blood splattered everywhere as the assassin screamed in pain, but no sound came out of his mouth. He fell on the floor, gurgling and clutching his neck as blood poured out. Bruce threw his Adam's apple towards another assassin's face. The blood splattered, blinding his eyes temporarily.
Batman x Arc Reactor
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
Black Canary, Thea Queen, Sara Lance.
ch 63 ARROW
Batman x Arc Reactor
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc