PsydeON - Profile

he wakes up from a coma and realises that he was in an accident that almost killed him. The story is a dream designed to wake him up, all the girls are AI created by a crazy yandere who kidnapped him to look for a way to heal him. That yandere used to be a lesbian until MC went: "being gay is an illness so I'll blackmail you until you fall in love with me" (paraphrased, not the exact words)

he's not writing in a more sophisticated way, he's using AI to write the chapters for him. A lot of shit is long-winded, repetitive or straight up unreadable. The first 50 chapters are great though

Wasted potential.The first arc was a cliché but entertaining story by a clearly inexperienced, albeit promising up-and-coming author.It followed the tried and true trope of a reincarnator having to steal a son of luck protagonist's fate, with a fairly standard cast of characters (and yes, there are yanderes).The end of the first arc was where the story truly started to come into its own and showed flashes of brilliance, very successfullly expanding the world and upping the stakes, starting to build up a confrontation with the antagonist towards the end of the story. Unfortunately, this webnovel never managed to get there, suddenly entering a hiatus that lasted for months. By the time the novel came back, it rushed into a forced ending, disregarding all events in the story up to that point and breaking one of the most basic taboos in storytelling (it was all a dream...)Also worth noting that towards the end of the story the author remembered he was homophobic and decided to never forget again by reminding the reader every other chapter, spouting some of the most atrocious takes I've read, particularly in the sidestory

I'm begging you, please use punctuation when writing long paragraphs