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Unknown_The_Author
male LV 2I'm just a humble author that writes for the sake of it. Anime, manga, manhwa, novels, I dig all of them. My works are mostly psychological, meant to slowly break their target... Anyway I hope you enjoy my stuff!
2023-03-25 Joined South AfricaBadges 6
Moments 51
air bubble ?
Looking around the cabin and making sure there was soundproof formation, the modest lady nodded before taking out a jade plaque which formed a small hair bubble around the head of her, stretching towards the other person, who also nodded and didn't resist.
Imperial Eunuch
Fantasy · Luninu
Said I'd be here bruv
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Unknown here, love the story. System: are you sure... are you sure you sure real sure... are you sure sure sure😂
ch 0 1 Rage Fuel!!! -Cliché?
Rage Fuel!!!
Fantasy · Wisefield
i like the fact that he only sees his system now, but I do feel like the chaps are kinda lengthy.
ch 0 2 Drowning Sorrows (2)
My System was Muted!
Fantasy · Daoistc5PXIE
A bit lengthy but an enjoyable first read.
ch 0 1 Doing Things Manually (1)
My System was Muted!
Fantasy · Daoistc5PXIE
A great start, I would recommend ironing out your tenses. All and all the novel is a great read.
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Great build up, it feels weird having this paragraph when you mentioned his mom's death. Maybe end the chap by mentioning that his mom died.
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The sequence of events with the bag were a bit confusing, and the chapter feel short. You could gradually increase them.
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Unknown here, great start, I feel like writing in past tense is something you could look into.
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I knew it looked familiar!!! Nah it's not, you improvised upon it but the resemblance is kinda canny. I say role with it, looks mad hype and bold, grabbing reader's attention.
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Absolutely a great story. The diction is next level and the plot gradually broadens. A story I would well recommend.
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It's pretty good, next level diction I must say. It's funny how the cover kinda looks like i became the pope so what.
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Thanks for your thoughts on the story. As far as what happens to the characters, you have to read further to find out.
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Oh, don't mind me, just shamelessly reviewing my work. It's pretty good, you should try it out.
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Unknown here, An interesting concept really, I'd never consider making the MC... anyway it's a good read, I love the mystique and build up towards the MC being found. Unknown out.
Imperial Eunuch
Fantasy · Luninu