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This is 4yrs later but i do understand what you mean things like this the dynamics between emotions and intellect is never done properly. Because author could have labelled that although he has the memories and experiences of a past life but because he’s returned it’s forming a balancing act either he’s a young man demeanour beyond his age meaning he’ll still have those reckless emotions just when needed he can learn to act appropriately or just do what all such stories do and just make them act like kids whilst claiming they disdain this and that 🤦🏾‍♂️. Honestly if anything it should bet a plot whole to then fill in with charater growth but when does that ever happen 😂😂😂

Sorry even if i’m biased i’ve read many novels but this one is just personally for me tops them all especially if we’re talking about cultivation novels, it’s nice to have a competent MC, the harem is written well too (harems ain’t bad they just need to be written well, especially if the woman actually take part in the story and aren’t just flower vases after MC gets them) the world building just drags you in, even if there’s info dump I actually want to read it and not skip it, although his cultivation is well behind but you can’t judge just based on that nonetheless i do await for what’s it like when he catches up (i’m assuming he’ll sky rocket with his Mytsic ascenion 👀 dude has like 6 laws already so…). If writer is seeing these messages i have a question as although it was mentioned his parents died but there corpses weren’t really found so does that mean they’re still alive or is there a possibility that they are just curious…?

I’d say the many issues with Harems isn’t the Harem trope itself but the way it’s written. The women tend to always become flower vases even when they was heavens blessed etc, pokemon go collect them all etc and it always ruins it. They all need to be in the story and not just part of it, stories are fantasy but if real life thinking is incorporated properly it works well. Take the save a hoe idea, the MC motive could be selfish, only for a benefit he wants not just a happy coincidence at least develop dialogue between the 2, natural flow of feelings i mean shit if you facing 10 different sect 8 different realms this and that immortal pointing your sword at the heavenly but stumped on tje dynamics between men and women like wtf 🙃🙃, or standing up for his women i’d rather the FMC whoop who ever ass needs whooping herself i mean she’s a talented cultivator in her own right is well isn’t she. Or the classic separation, no form of communication whatsoever then you never see her till chapter 1000 or so only to be seperated again. I’m sure like me you could predict the story, say example modern day cultivation stories its, beauty CEO, the assistant, some university chicks bffs + teach, policewoman, rival beauty CEO, some foreigner, hidden sect chicks, some arranged marriage chick from his kicked out of family the order could be same or different but it’s too predictable. Nonetheless i’ll be starting “Romatic Cultivator” and reviews look promising but i gotta read it myself first ✌🏾

Erm author-kun, i (hope) was wondering to will be relinquish his devil bloodline for a better one it’s to be honest nerfing him way too much with this holy light attributed attacks, it’s not tht its bad but it’s basically limiting, now maybe there’s a purpose or story behind it but honestly i’d like a never seen before bloodline for the MC, or better yet merge and fuse different bloodlines to form his own new one, one that evolves with him as he gains strength. Just a thought tho nothing personal against the bloodline he has now just it’s limiting him we don’t see it much and yes that’s what a trump card should be but it’s too easy in your face “he’s a devil so use holy light attacks” 🤔 it’s almost plot armour to account for a loss.

Definitely enjoying the story so far, i do hope to see the girls brought together soon not out of necessity but it’s also just a due to happen. What about saki and his daughter how far off author-kun. + the demons invation is that still happening…?? And finally future wise he’s sure to leave Blue Star and venture to other realms. Ps.. will we get a cultivation realm world hop. Not to sure if author replies but just some questions.

Author is doing wanders, this amusing as hell, although if there’s anything author could look into (read up to 114) is MC manipulation tactics needs to be more broader he is a villain yes indeed but he should approach different heroines with different tactics because at the end of the day he’s doing something villainous by manipulating them but so far it’s seems the same all force, what about some slick tactics having them approach him instead after he’s spun his web of traps, or use already gotten heroines into manipulating others by proxy you know variety or a challenge into manipulating them without trying to inflict any negative emotions as a challenge. No I’m not asking for a hero i’d like more intrigue not just she got big tits i’m tryna fu**. But don’t get me wrong author it’s definitely interesting till so far 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Read up to ch.92 so far an all i can say up till thia point is fantastic. Well systems not been around but it’s ok. People’s opinions on harems aren’t th best but if written well, where the story revolves around a good plot, just the write amount of snu-snu then it works. Of course up to where i am there’s been no major action but it’s still so well written that I’m still captivated.

Definitely enjoyed the story so far, plots good so is the world building and just the right amount of snu-snu for the cultured, if there’s on thing i could change or advise the author on its the round about way that he keeps repeating the same thing just in a different way almost seeming to just fill up more when there’s no need. Plus as cultivation is the one thing that separates them from others (well so far for now I’m assuming they’re there just later on the story) i’d be happy to see it explored more.

Been reading and i must say I’ve definitely enjoyed, the intricacies will keep you intrigued from chapter to chapter, although i do want to see more personal action from MC, and being a avid lover of swords myself seeing it’s also the weapon MC uses it definitely needs more screen time. Plus MC power realm needs to keep up it’s lagging to far behind i’m not asking for the typical 12chpts OP MC hardly, however to nerf him too much is a bit…. Nonetheless it’s been fantastic so far

Not read very far but yes maybe he’ll add a harem tag which by all means make sense because unlike many other harems Bai Zeman isn’t collecting them all lile pokemon the 3 girls involved with him also aren’t some bimbo’s but actually interesting, plus it would be such a buzzkill if at the end he denys them a relationship with MC when all readers can see it, basically not all Harems novels are bad if plot is good enough

Hello 😁, I’v recently read up to 124 so I’ve enjoyed the story so far, but like i said maybe i‘m judging to early and he’ll maybe have a character awakening, of course “Xiao Mo” hasn’t appeared yet but i’m hoping on top of him making connections that he’s focused more on developing himself with connections on top, in system tropes terms it’s the equivalent of i have a system press a button but never try to comprehend the skills. Also asking will we get a more comprehensive view of sword law/intent?? (personal favourite weapon if i do say so myself)

For now i think it’s going well, but MC needs to differentiate himself from the rest. If all he’ll do is befriend strong characters he himself seems useless. it should centre him and if he befriends or kill’s the 5 plane children the it’s a bonus, all the 5 plane children happen to just make the story more interesting is what I’m saying. Basically what i‘m saying is i read the story but MC still feels detached, so far his feminine looks seem like the best thing about him when actually his potential is just as great as if not better than the plane children, but i guess maybe I’m judging to much he’s still 13 after all. Anyways I don’t know if Author see’s these comments but I’m definitely looking forward to his character development. ✌🏾✌🏾