Ahmed_Ahmed_8379

1)to thé author i did like the previce novel intl chapter 120 went you change thé rewten style and i hâte it 2) i thinke light novel (why should i stop being a villain ) might help you in thé idia you training to make 3) and i apologies about thé mistike my english is a littele Bad 4) this juste an idia but thé one who give yassen thé Book is sammone who Can sée thé future and moneblat thé évent for his advantge ???? 5) lat Say thé mc say( juste because sammone rawit something in Book dosent mean hé Can control me this my life i rewit my on story) 6) did thé FM ben decive to hâte mc and leave him by ( her Friend thé mc sister and mc raevel)?????

ch 56 killing The NightGaurd

The Villain's Side Of the Story In The New Plot

Fantasy · Fri123

Ahmed_Ahmed_8379

1mth

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1)to thé author i did like the previce novel intl chapter 120 went you change thé rewten style and i hâte it 2) i thinke light novel (why should i stop being a villain ) might help you in thé idia you training to make 3) and i apologies about thé mistike my english is a littele Bad 4) this juste an idia but thé one who give yassen thé Book is sammone who Can sée thé future and moneblat thé évent for his advantge ???? 5) lat Say thé mc say( juste because sammone rawit something in Book dosent mean hé Can control me this my life i rewit my on story) 6) did thé FM ben decive to hâte mc and leave him by ( her Friend thé mc sister and mc raevel)?????

ch 56 killing The NightGaurd

The Villain's Side Of the Story In The New Plot

Fantasy · Fri123

Ahmed_Ahmed_8379

1mth

Replied to Death_Simulation

avere Time we thinke mc is strong we finde that his not there is more to luren to develep his querfuel and intelligente and with Time we finde more secret about his power about thé World way hé has thé power (cheat) take you time

ch 24 Chapter 24- Made- Up story

Gene Evolution: Monster Simulator

Fantasy · Death_Simulation

Ahmed_Ahmed_8379

1mth

Replied to Death_Simulation

1-blood warlok (charcuter interaction and mc personnalité growth) 2-god rank upgrad system(for mc in New World) 3-author pov ( for mc in New World) 4-why should i stop being a villain ( not avre thin is good and evil) 5-shadw slave ( mc caushs and entalgent) 6 -second life of ranker

ch 24 Chapter 24- Made- Up story

Gene Evolution: Monster Simulator

Fantasy · Death_Simulation

Ahmed_Ahmed_8379

1mth

Commented

for thé author 1)i am curies did you take inspiration from (light novel super gêne) 2) i Hope you dont fall for thé mistike tha avere now author fall for make thé mc and avre one Nathan but a charcuter ( thay need to be alive ) if you like i Can geve you racamandation of good novel that well halep you and sorry about mistake I am not good in English

ch 24 Chapter 24- Made- Up story

Gene Evolution: Monster Simulator

Fantasy · Death_Simulation

Ahmed_Ahmed_8379

1mth

Commented

1)it not Bad 2)Angelica should live if she die thé story well be to darke 3)you should with Time make zane more humen not a totole a good Guy but more humen with emotion 4)a have an Idea what if thé Queen of zombie is zane sister

ch 98 A Haunting Past

Dead Man Walking: Living By Day, Dead By Night

Urban · Zentmeister

Ahmed_Ahmed_8379

1mth

Posted

my english is Bad but ber with me it wad a good story with a lat of potanchel but After 250 a hâte it 1) it became repeted 2) in thé first chapter you side thé système fond a Host who thé Real Host ???? first a thot soul fuisen and that good or awaken of past momorie tha good but your side aditya die that mine thé system kill him stole his body and give it to samoine Ilse ( what happen to thé soul contract that if hé die his wive die) 3) that mine it (NTR) what do you thinke well happen wine FM finde aute tha aditya die and samoine else is sleepen with them ( i stole his body but i have his momorie and émotions so i canne sleep with you) !!!!! that make me sike and it exeset in all thé New novel 4) réincarnation mine (momorie from thé year 0). transmegation (momorie of past life at year 16 or 17 that way thé porsnalte shange a litill) or ( soul fuisen). possetion( steal thé body ) . régression ( toren bake Time). 5) a hâte wen thé author kill a charcuter steal thé body give it to samoine else and give thé famille thé frinde thé wife (girlfriend ) to that persen and nobady notece 6) juaste bécasse his from earth with système dasent mine he king of avrethen 7) systeme is ( anhereten of samoine or a blessn from thé World or samoine trayen to make you there toyo to player with you) 8)mc bet samoine is good but how is it possible to bet 1000 or 10000 of year of miletre power or techniques and ressources 9) note avere one is morone (ideat) 10) way avre new novel thé mc from earth with système. way cant mc from his World with cheat or power or good tetcher or genise. anthen is good

Dragon Monarch System

Urban · Dark_Bangali

Ahmed_Ahmed_8379

1mth

Posted

i réale like the story but After chapter 600 it pecame repeted and cliche thé charcuter develpment of thé mc non exeset thé FM no longer do adeventer with him thé univers wite for thé mc to savait it pecame like Bad chinese novel (face slape)

Void Evolution System

Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead

Ahmed_Ahmed_8379

1mth

Posted

i like the story it has unique power system first of it kind but your Mike power system more and more complexe and it hard to kep up if possible to do a chapter to explinet

Dimensional Descent

Fantasy · Awespec

Ahmed_Ahmed_8379

1mth

Commented

it is possible for more chapter 2 _3 a day insted of 1

ch 95 Buying a Slave Part II

Dead Man Walking: Living By Day, Dead By Night

Urban · Zentmeister

Ahmed_Ahmed_8379

1mth

Posted

1)one of thé best novel 2)but there is no update 3)thé last 20 chapter a littele rach 4)if posseble i want more then 5000 chapter 5)i want the author to take his Time with thé store develpment like the previce chapter