This is good but you should work on your grammar and vocabulary improve on your story telling the premise is good but try and explain more on what's happening people might get lost what story is trying to do but overall it's really fresh story and I think it has a great potential if you work on your skills as a writer you should be able to create a great story just don't rush it
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This is good but you should work on your grammar and vocabulary improve on your story telling the premise is good but try and explain more on what's happening people might get lost what story is trying to do but overall it's really fresh story and I think it has a great potential if you work on your skills as a writer you should be able to create a great story just don't rush it
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