Mummamea1234

1yr

Posted

Wow wished she did not fear his love and self sabotaging what is developing between the two. Can see the age difference between the two characters Rhiannon comes off childish due to her age and Dimitri has clearly years of experience. Starting to think he should just move onto someone else if she flees to another this easily.

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Urban · R.A.Haigwood

Mummamea1234

1yr

Commented

Cannot wait to see what her father does...

ch 25 Best Time

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Urban · R.A.Haigwood

Mummamea1234

1yr

Commented

Ahh they are looking cute so far, cannot wait to see how this develops.

ch 19 Leaving Him Wanting More

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Urban · R.A.Haigwood

Mummamea1234

1yr

Commented

Oh that was very sweet of him. Wonder which one is upset at her I can guess it would be her brother.

ch 17 A Normal Night, Maybe?

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Urban · R.A.Haigwood

Mummamea1234

1yr

Posted

I'm really enjoying this story so far. It's different to what I have found on this app, give it a go. I want to know what happens next so badly.

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Urban · R.A.Haigwood

Mummamea1234

1yr

Commented

Oh, I like where this is going. Think Rhiannon is being a bit too harsh on Dimitri he seems to be really into her. The nutter seems to be jealous that he is not looking at her. Cannot wait for the next update. Is anyone else r or adding this story too?

ch 15 Girl's Day

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Urban · R.A.Haigwood

Mummamea1234

1yr

Posted

Cannot give a full review as only the first five chapters are free which has already turned me off. As myself with my own work on here under my pen name not this one it's a % amount before you should. Considering how many chapters you have already out bit money hungry you come across.