Badges 5
Moments 47
Except he doesn't have that kind of power, yet, so making this whole preaching absolutely useless. Astra can do that, sure. Someone who controls a territory can solve things in many different ways, but for those who are at the bottom, there are other ways to keep people in check. That's how underground leaders come to be, after all. Even in less shady situations, children of the elite always get ahead with all sorts tactics. Astra is delusional if she thinks Vaan can solve things the same way she can. Either she helps him already instead of blocking him all the time, or lets him do his thing. This is ridiculous.
He finally understood what his mother said about not being the dog but the owner. His thinking of threatening them to the point they fear betraying you, it was good, but it would only work for an underworld gang leader, he, however, wanted to be the Ruler of the entire City which was as big as a Kingdom.
Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
Yup, they're pushovers. They didn't do anything when 5 stronger mages ganged up on him to beat him up, and now they want to let Roland live because Vaan hit him. How pathetic
That boy will be punished, however, the fact still remains that you were the one who started all this. We cannot just kill a child of the Frostmoon Family when you were in the wrong as well. That would ruin the Family Image.
Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
All these nobles from the Vesta family are naïve pushovers I swear. They've been openly bullying Vaan, Roland even dared to aim for his life and Seraphina wanted to turn him into a useless drug addict. They're all blind
"You think anyone would dare to kill the child of the Vesta Family?"
Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
That actually makes them blood-related, lol
" The girl is actually his younger brother's daughter,"
My Evil Stepson System
Urban · Megabyte
I'll be honest, I'm not feeling the romance between these two. It started forced and subsequently, every interaction between the two of them felt forced. There's no way to salvage this romance because since the beginning, Vaan has had to act out of character to justify their forced romance. It's evidently clear that Elara is not compatible with Vaan and the only way they could ever be happy is if Vaan turned into a complete different person. He has already shown some growth, but teaching a lesson to people who openly look down on him is necessary if he wants to improve his reputation. He doesn't have to turn into some pretentious noble.
"Stay like this for a while, I feel relaxed," Vaan spoke in a soft voice.
Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
Come on, man. Enough of Laylah, she sucks as a character. She's the queen of mary sues and annoying, plus she makes MC stupid. She's literally the worst kind of character you could possibly have in a novel.
ch 47 We will continue in next time
Apocalypse Chaos - I am the villain
Sci-fi · HikaruKiki
He's a pathetic excuse of a man
Damn it! Don't think you can forcibly kiss a man.
Apocalypse Chaos - I am the villain
Sci-fi · HikaruKiki
Did the author have an aneurysm or something? What is going on
ch 42 It's better to have a guide
Apocalypse Chaos - I am the villain
Sci-fi · HikaruKiki
Jesus christ, why is the MC a beta harem protagonist now?
"AAAA!!!" Hikaru shouted in surprise, he hurriedly grabbed his clothes and went to the bathroom.
Apocalypse Chaos - I am the villain
Sci-fi · HikaruKiki
Not afraid? He was literally quaking in his boots when he got confronted by Laylah. He's a wimp
Hikaru was not afraid of strong enemies, he was only afraid of stupid teammates.
Apocalypse Chaos - I am the villain
Sci-fi · HikaruKiki
God, what happened to this novel? Why is he so pathetic right now? Going by the direction this is going, I can take a wild guess and when Hikaru gets the chance to get his revenge on her, he won't take it and will leave us all blue balled.
Laylah shook her head and forced a smile, it seemed that she was overdoing it and made Hikaru run away in fear.
Apocalypse Chaos - I am the villain
Sci-fi · HikaruKiki
So, is the MC the villain or is he gonna be the so-called licking dog? These last few chapters were awful
ch 39 Even while you sleep...
Apocalypse Chaos - I am the villain
Sci-fi · HikaruKiki
I'm really enjoying this novel, but I could do without the cringe Japanese
[Umu, Let's rule the world, starting with Amber City.]
My Evil Stepson System
Urban · Megabyte
I'm probably gonna drop this, soon. People have been complaining about the MC wasting his time and the fact that the author removed his talent for a while and the author has done nothing to remedy this. Even with all his knowledge and cheats, he is still pathetic and goes around picking fights that he can't win.
ch 68 68. Humiliation
Help! I don't want to NTR the protagonist!
Fantasy · NineSleepyDragons
Submissive + masochist = best girl
ch 63 63. What Took You So Long Daddy? R18.
My Evil Stepson System
Urban · Megabyte
But elements materialise in the form of real concepts, such as fire and water. If they have the same properties, then they can definitely be combined.
ch 68 Fire and Water
Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
I've already complained about the MC's lack of power and he still is lacking. I understand it takes time, but it's alreacy almost 70 chapters in. Maybe you could spend less time writing slice-of-life chapters and get to the point. Aside from that, I recommend staying true to the title and synopsis of this novel and actually NTR the protagonist. So far, the women aren't being stolen because they never did nor feel anything for the protagonist. The protagonist should at least have some feelings for the girl for it to be considered NTR.
ch 67 67. Freinds
Help! I don't want to NTR the protagonist!
Fantasy · NineSleepyDragons
So, is he ever gonna get stronger? lol
ch 57 57. Mages and Fighters
Help! I don't want to NTR the protagonist!
Fantasy · NineSleepyDragons
For a novel in the early stages, this one shows promise. The author is building an interesting world with unique characters and a hint of mystery, I personally loved that reveal in the latest chapter. Looking forward to more chapters and watching the story unfold
NTR Rogue in the Apocalypse
Action · Anaesthetic_Dawn