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I was thinking about reading this, but on the third line I realized that the main character of this fanfic is a damm k!d, how damm disgusting, I immediately abandoned it.

I'm on chapter 387, Seriously Jian Shu didn't die what a disappointment, this arc in my opinion was not good we never saw our mc fight properly and when he fought at the end he was repressed and if it wasn't for help he would have died, besides why he is still not a great master, Another point is that he just keeps flirting and doesn't advance or grow, the previous plot where there was ntr bothered me but I said let's give him another chance and boom chapters later Jun left that world and only hinted that when he comes back he will only take the useless girl he left pregnant with him, so my question is why did he love the mother and daughter and the girl from the dojo if he was just going to put them aside as waste, I hope the author changes that and when he goes to that world he takes them all, and now with the new system functions I think that will be possible, I hope the next plot will be more interesting because the first 150 chapters were pretty good, that's my opinion and a greeting.

the story is unbelievably boring, the first arc was good but now in that other world everything was boring there is no plot advance, that torture of the supreme 5 was absurd, about 6 chapters lost in that meaningless torture, just kill them and Done, another important thing, the villain looks like a beta protagonist letting himself be commanded and manipulated by his women, another point is that the dialogues of his "harem" (only 2 women) are so flat that they seem robotic, anyway, I hope that this third arc is better written and adds more women to the harem and doesn't make their conversations so flat and robotic postscript: If you delete the review I will repost it