CelestialVenerable - Profile

I can't wait for more. Good fanfics are rare. The characters seem like themselves, not warped like in other fanfics I've read. The conversation flows smoothly, and it seems natural. Plus, the whole set-up seems very interesting.

From what I saw while reading this, I definitely see the potential. The writing is good, descriptive, and without any grammatical errors, as far as I can see. The novel's setting also intrigues me, and true to what Mr. Digit posted on TT, the protagonist is surrounded by mysterious circumstances. In short, I do recommend this. It has great potential. It is inspired by great pieces of work like Lord of Mysteries, Deep Sea Embers, Throne of Magical Arcana, and Shadow Slave. In short, there is no way this story will lack in the mystery and worldbuilding aspect. Furthermore, the protagonist and other characters, including the "twin," catch my eye. A shame it has so few chapters, but that will change with time. Although the first chapter confused me, the following chapters hooked me.