Don't know where to start. So I'll start from anywhere. 1) The writing quality got me like... Wow. Don't know about you, but I didn't see any error while reading. ha, they are some but it's better. So good job author 2) The story development is on a whole different level. Hope you keep it up. 3) Character design is perfect. Especially Akki. you have even made a sidekick as an MC
Urban · M_G_Subramanyam
same for me
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Don't know where to start. So I'll start from anywhere. 1) The writing quality got me like... Wow. Don't know about you, but I didn't see any error while reading. ha, they are some but it's better. So good job author 2) The story development is on a whole different level. Hope you keep it up. 3) Character design is perfect. Especially Akki. you have even made a sidekick as an MC
Shambhala The Ultimate Legacy
Urban · M_G_Subramanyam