helsia

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2023-04-12 Joined United States
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helsia
1 years ago
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the amount of detail within each paragraph is astounding, you can tell how much effort the author put into describing the characters and the world around them. the dialogue also flows smoothly and naturally, allowing the reader to easily imagine a conversation between two characters in their head. this story is incredibly promising and also takes certain tropes and plays around them, which is always interesting to see. the writing in general is almost flawless, as everything is coherent and makes sense without having to reread anything.

helsia
helsia
1 years ago
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very interesting premise, the characters seem to feel realistic and well-written, and you can get a sense of where the story is going whilst at the same time leaving you with questions. there are some grammatical errors here and there, along with some tense inconsistencies, but it's still legible and doesn't take away much from the overall experience while reading.

helsia
helsia
1 years ago
Commented

vindyr's queen...?

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She certainly possessed a noble look about her, as she had blonde, golden hair done in a fancy braid, along with a flowing red cape and light armor that a beginning adventurer would wear. She also had gentle purple eyes, a color that suited a person of her status.

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helsia
helsia
1 years ago
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what an intelligent looking young man!

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The man, now known as Invictas, extended his hand towards the young woman, and gazed into her eyes with his soft, green eyes.

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helsia
helsia
1 years ago
Commented

"a new me."

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After combing and straightening it out for a bit, she tied her hair in a single side ponytail. For the final touch, she grabbed the red flower she always wore and attached it to her hair, a symbol of her old self.

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helsia
helsia
1 years ago
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a survivor.

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Helsyn grabbed the man by his throat in anger, and easily snapped it, just like she had done before. She tossed the man's body through the same hole she had just created moments earlier, and looked at the horrified girl who had just witnessed a traumatic event before her. She used a sharpened skeleton finger to cut the restraints off of the girl's hands.

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helsia
helsia
1 years ago
Commented

"helsyn."

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Getting a good look at herself, she stared into her own red eyes, slowly examining her features. Her eyes scanned up and down from her messy hair, to the red flower hair pin she always wore, to her reliable white t-shirt, down to the bandages that covered both her wrists.

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Fantasy · helsia

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    Fantasy MAGIC DARK SUPERPOWERS ANIME SINGLEFEMALELEAD

    One day, a wormhole suddenly appeared over the nation of Vindyr, harvesting the souls of its citizens. Helsyn, a special survivor of the disaster known as the "Cataclysm", reawakens with supernatural powers and takes it upon herself to find the one responsible for the incident, partaking in a long, arduous journey across the five realms of Desiderium. Her one purpose being to consume the lost souls, and release them back to their rightful owners.

    11 Chs 5 Collections