Another thing I forgot to mention is how the author when use 5 or so paragraphs to explain one thing when you can just use one. That needs to be condensed because I always find myself skipping a bunch of paragraph because it's just a long ass explanation of one topic.
I'm so confused about what's happening bro
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Awakening
Anime & Comics · Netapel
Yes but you should have made it sound like that, the way you did it was so abrupt. for example: "It would be cool if I could guide peter and make him a better Spider-Man.". That sounds better is making it more seamless but the way you did left me like 'why did he just randomly think that?'
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Anime & Comics · THE_V1S1ON
I am kind of disappointed that's he's so serious all the time. I know why and I know he's trying to focus on getting stronger but I would still like to see him acting goofy with his friends from time to time. I think moments like that are necessary to break tension
What do you think of the Itadori so far? Has his personality been pleasant?
Anime & Comics · TheJiujitsuGuy
bro how does he 'love' this girl? We don't know anything about her yet they are already in love how does that make any sense? Your supposed to get us to care about a character so important but if Isabella died the next chapter I wouldn't care WHICH IS BAD.
ch 0 7 training completed
Urban · VoidSystem
Yup definitely has a fast pacing. Isabella should have been explored more as a character and we should've seen more interactions between her and the MC before we even think of going out on a date. So far all the characters including the MC are extremely bland.
ch 0 2 Date
Urban · VoidSystem
please let kaguya stay with miyuki. I love their relationship soo much
ch 47 Finding a CEO (1/2)
Anime & Comics · Addyctive7
I wonder when peter is going to meet harry cuz I thought they would've met by now. Also I hope peter still becomes spider-man and still fights some villians on his own without Tut helping him. Thanks for the chapter.
ch 48 Chapter 47: Moveable Object
Movies · Ozonelayer
It's really good but my only problem is that the romance is rushed a lot. We should've seen more scenes of them hanging out and slowly falling in love. Not only that I feel like Ruby and Aqua accepted him too quickly, especially Ruby. Good story just rushed. 7/10
Oshi No Ko: Duet of Destinies
Anime & Comics · XaviValentine