Jeremy_Smith_6986

1yr

Posted

Honestly this gets close to the perfect Harry Potter Fanfic... It has new characters with interesting personalities and to top it all off, a great ability which isn't presented as completely broken but rather something he needs to explore to properly use. Great work!

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr

Jeremy_Smith_6986

1yr

Posted

The overall story is good, just very frustrating that he's so cautious and doesn't seem to even consider getting the "Confession" quirk which would work perfectly with his...

Altered Mind (MHA)

Anime & Comics · Anubis_Creationz

Jeremy_Smith_6986

1yr

Commented

Ohh smart... hadn't thought of that

'One persona can read their minds, another can control my body, another can invade their mind and establish a link, etc.' Dolian had his eyes sparkle as inspiration came pouring through, before he then calmed down and laughed, 'Calm down, that's unrealistic for the young Dolian right now. I'm way too inexperienced to do things like that… for now.'

MHA: Author of Fate

Anime & Comics · NoNameDeity

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