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looks cyberpunk. Is that another kingdom/country?
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Excellent writing quality. I really hope you keep updating it. Can't wait to read more!!
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Man, do we really have to read about some other character getting a harem? lol. I think this is as close as NTR as it can get without it being actual NTR considering the whole Mary thing.
The moment they entered the canteen, all eyes shifted towards them, creating a fluffy and joyous atmosphere. Many boys looked enviously at Adam's current position, accompanied by the student council president, a first-year girl holding his hand, and another girl by their side.
No More Pain For This Villain.
Fantasy · Satan03
I get what you're trying to do, but you can also do it while you improve the pace. This will be good for everyone, including you. If you push your luck people will stop reading your novel. Anyway, it's good that you're taking this in stride and want to improve. I hope you do.
ch 146 To Hestia Empire-Sea Journey.
No More Pain For This Villain.
Fantasy · Satan03
Bro, you really are gonna pull a chapter out of everything, won't you? Come on, man, we don't care about some inconsequential storm or some random prostitute. Don't forget that you are selling us these chapters and we're supposed to pay for this whole load of nothing.
ch 146 To Hestia Empire-Sea Journey.
No More Pain For This Villain.
Fantasy · Satan03
Yeah, it's been delayed by 140 chapters already, lol
"In three days," I replied, realizing that I couldn't delay my journey any longer. The urgency to uncover the truth, making it impossible to stay idle.
No More Pain For This Villain.
Fantasy · Satan03
Author, stop getting sidetracked with every little thing, lol. I want to read stuff about the main plot, i.e Mary, the original MC, the academy, etc. Almost everything that has happened so far was outside of the original plot. Can you please step it up? This novel has a word count higher than The Fellowship of The Ring already and barely anything has happened.
ch 142 That Escalated Quickly.
No More Pain For This Villain.
Fantasy · Satan03
I dropped it as well. MC is pathetic
Alright, enough. I'm dropping this. This is ridiculous
Finally, he shook his head and said, "Okay! I'll just go with the flow… it's better than being her enemy anyway. Laylah is like Amanda Ryrlia, they are both too dangerous and mysterious."
Apocalypse Chaos - I am the villain
Sci-fi · HikaruKiki
No, please kill her
[Master, it seems… if you make Laylah fall in love with you then you and her could become allies. At that time, Laylah can help you earn more luck points.]
Apocalypse Chaos - I am the villain
Sci-fi · HikaruKiki
He won't. I'm calling it, he'll get a chance to kill her and he won't kill her.
If he was given a chance to kill a certain protagonist in this world, he would definitely kill Laylah first.
Apocalypse Chaos - I am the villain
Sci-fi · HikaruKiki
Man, way to ruin a good novel. The MC is pathetic right now
ch 41 Ryrlia's thinking...
Apocalypse Chaos - I am the villain
Sci-fi · HikaruKiki
This novel went downhill pretty fast
"I've left it to the others to investigate him, during this time, Hikaru hasn't used any other strange potions."
Apocalypse Chaos - I am the villain
Sci-fi · HikaruKiki
He is indeed impulsive, but unreasonable? That depends how you see it. He was attacked with a lethal spell and he responded in kind. If someone tried to kill you in your own home, what would you do? Forgive him? I really hope Astra takes his side this time, and if not, that Vaan grows some balls and finally stands up to his mother. He was in the right here, who knows what would've happened if he didn't counterattack.
ch 74 He was not calm and reasonable at all.
Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
It is true. There is nuance to cooperation, but only so much. Even in sports, the teams with the best players win most of the times. Team work can only take you so far, and when individual abilities aren't up to par, teams will fall behind. Even if they have spent years working together.
For example, the "checkmark" in front of them needed two handprints to unlock.
I Became The Mafia Boss Inside The Novel
Fantasy · Deathilim_609
Seems a little too convoluted and to test teamwork no less. Whilst teamwork is indeed important, it is nowhere near as important as individual abilities. Because someone with great skills has the potential to adapt to any team. It's easier to learn how to cooperate than to hone one's skills or grow in strength.
For example, the "checkmark" in front of them needed two handprints to unlock.
I Became The Mafia Boss Inside The Novel
Fantasy · Deathilim_609
This dude's annoying, I'd avoid him, too. Good for Lance
He found it a pity that the nobleman was stubborn and too prideful to team up with them, but he didn't want to push any more of the man's patience.
I Became The Mafia Boss Inside The Novel
Fantasy · Deathilim_609
Great story so far. I didn't expect much from a title such as this one, but I was pleasantly surprised. Serious fight scenes and no NTR, yet, but I assume there will be, soon. Keep up the good job, author
NTR Rogue in the Apocalypse
Action · Anaesthetic_Dawn