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The story is interesting, the problem is that the development of the races, sometimes Mc himself, are inconsistent. In the fic it says that Mc knows about the world but then in parts as simple as knowing who the heroines are he forgets it, there is also the issue of the demonic race that they are born with a limit of demonic power and that they cannot overcome it, although train you will not be able to exceed that limit.

Muy bueno espero actualizaciones mas seguidas, no se si trancurriendo el tiempo agregaras personajes al harem o solo con las que ya estan, ya que tengo algunos h en mente que podrian estar interesante como los implementas.

Reseña en Español La historia es excelente en muchas cosas, pero no le puedo dar las 5 estrellas simplemente la actualizacion de nuevos capitulos es muy lenta, y es entendible ya que el autor no es una maquina para escribir diario y del igual forma puede haber bloqueos de autor. Quitando la falta de actualizacion todo es excelente y espero que siga publicando mas capitulos. Review in English The story is excellent in many ways, but I can't give it 5 stars, the updating of new chapters is simply very slow, and it is understandable since the author is not a diary writing machine and in the same way there can be author blocks. Aside from the lack of updates, everything is excellent and I hope you continue publishing more chapters.

I was liking the story even though it was very slow, but I stopped reading it for a simple reason that it doesn't go up in full R+18 in full only half goes up and the full goes up on patreon