I like it, Picasso👍
ch 0 3 It's Alright
Teen · Abe_Writes
awww sad that it ended but have a good day author <3
ch 13 The End
TV · Unknownducky
I would say the writing is about a 4 because of the few sentences sometimes, but the grammar is good. The stability of updates seems to be about a couple chapters a month and then a couple the next month. There is no pattern so I say a 3 to be honest, but you post more often than me as I lose motivation a lot. Story development is great! I understand 1/4 because I only watched like one Marvel movie- my fault for that so I'll give you a 5. Also the timeline is great 'cause I didn't want you to write a year worth of what stuff Alex did- I'm glad you skipped a year. The character design is op, I like kids with op powers destroying everything (Chapter 10), so 5. The world background changed in these newer chapters and its quite good even though I don't know what it looks like 'cause I'm not really a fan of marvel and I kinda of lose where the mc is either sitting, standing, walking, ect.. So a 3. I gave my honest opinion so I hope it helps. ^w^ Total is a 4, thanks for the chapters btw
This book has been deleted.
tbh I have seen them and I agree with you, I have no problem with you dropping this book. After all it's your book
If anyone tells me to give him black bolts powers or burning Martian powers I'm dropping this book. I can't post a single chapter without someone singing it in the comment section. It's irritating at this point.
Anime & Comics · Arokey
Ah.. I see.. thanks for letting me know and for the tips. :D
why tf did I start cussing them whilst crying-
"We'll… we'll figure it out. We'll make it up to him, Bella. I'll make sure that we do."
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
Are you sure ur not Cyno's family?
"Yup. A-door-able."
Genshin Impact: Spreading Anime Culture Across Teyvat
Video Games · UltimateSenpai