The set up, in terms of the origin story is good, but try to keep the sentences fresh, without repetitions and similarities such as the relationship between time and minusces. Make the sentences longer too. Nobody is born perfect; keep improving on it. I look forward to how this will unfold
ch 0 1 Prologue I (MINUSCLE)
Sci-fi · Boss_Milo1
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The set up, in terms of the origin story is good, but try to keep the sentences fresh, without repetitions and similarities such as the relationship between time and minusces. Make the sentences longer too. Nobody is born perfect; keep improving on it. I look forward to how this will unfold
ch 0 1 Prologue I (MINUSCLE)
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Sci-fi · Boss_Milo1