Great.
ch 0 -1 Glossary of Things.
Fantasy 路 Percy_Seacrest
For never writing a system novel before, you have some good ideas about it. The level up factors are well thought out. What got me hard were the lotus symbols for the five elemental powers. They have meaning in them...the tortoise, the unicorn, dragon, sea serpent and phoenix. I wonder how they can be manifested later on...
ch 0 -1 Glossary of Things.
Fantasy 路 Percy_Seacrest
As far as opening chapters go, this one is something else entirely. Different from anything I've ever read and intriguing. The immortals of the universe don't come across as larger than life...but homely. The way I like. Can't wait to read more.馃構馃槉
ch 0 2 Chapter 1) Ghost Boy.
Fantasy 路 Percy_Seacrest
The MC has got me hooked. I really want to see how things turn out for him. He's a mystic!!! 馃ぃ馃槀 He's funny and believable...sincere. He will become powerful.
ch 0 3 Chapter 2) System Initializing...
Fantasy 路 Percy_Seacrest
Where is the author of this series? Give me more! I want more! Its been about five days since the last update...since Xavier willingly walked into a terrible dungeon. I need to know his fate!!! Author???? 馃槯
ch 0 8 Chapter 7: Curiosity of Dungeons.
Celestial Academy of Mystics
Fantasy 路 Percy_Seacrest