Hi, a lot of chapters are out of order. Please fix this. Thanks
Zagreb
"Oripe was our coach now managing Mostar Željo, the Bosnian club Suker played for."
Celebrities · Sovannra_Seang_36
Should be coach/manager
"The boss retired, the owner left," Gattuso paused and looked at Šuker, "you're leaving too, right?"
Celebrities · Sovannra_Seang_36
Could have been an excellent novel if not for the Chinese propaganda.
About 184 cm on chapter 630
The brand rose too quickly. Honestly, a bit too fast paced
Lines are a bit too repetitive in the initial chapters
Although I like the story, the repeated bowing and courtesies is getting on my nerves.
Chaotic but feels like reading a Deadpool script. Great job
Please use an online editor. Current writing looks weird
Merchant between worlds [Marvels X LOTM]
Others · NxtDoorDuDE