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I can understand the planning and when the chapters come out to make a more complete arc it will work well, it’s just at the moment it feels stupid but I definitely look forward to it, I just hope he learns and becomes more bold.

I also have to second nexluz and my previous comment this is pushing it he is a Lannister and a Frey is literal trash just pull mountain tactics in the Frey lands or any number of other scheme any house in the westerlands would trip over themselves to get a favor other than 2 to the heir of the westerlands.

It was mentioned in the first chap that this is a marvel/ crossover

I really like this story so far and understand there is a plan, but in the current political situation of Westeros with a clearly defined hierarchy I feel like he should be much more dominating or vicious to the freys, they are a minor house that was only just recently established (600) and are effectively upjumped peasants in everyone’s eyes.

You could consider using subscribestar.adult if you want to make a bit of money as I really hope this story continues

He is a storm lander not a stark, why would he do any of that BS, and he will be a lord soon as his dad dies in 278

It’s similar to an ant and human relationship but they can communicate, what’s the harm in playing around when all they can return is a little sting at most

Just a small thing, the value you provided the galleon is illogical especially with the price of a magic bag, you should consider changing one of the numbers.just an example for context, the richest man on earth paying more than 1/10000 his net worth for a magic pouch equivalent to a check book.

The author clarified in a previous chapter that only the mc would have a superhuman body above everyone else so it doesn’t make sense, also ASOIAF bodies should be in general better as Robert fought 3 battles in 1 day an impossible feat for standard humans.

I could understand not being as upset about the lover but I feel a child is completely different and should be treated much harsher. Another bit is you don’t have to be smart or even relatively intelligent to be able to have made some decisions about preparing a proper future when you know what is to come, especially when you can take ideas from others?

I have a few questions/issues but didn’t want to leave a star rating yet. Why is he so stupid in the way he acts, especially as a reincarnation that appears to know the plot, how could he forgive a brother that killed his child?( he is acting way to friendly for the action) and in the same thread it’s ridiculous that he let Elijah form a relationship with his sister.

Is this a Repost or are you changing and editing the fic?

Can Aerodactyl still Mega evolve or is it just in a state of permanent Mega evolution.

Thx for the chap Author, I think having the eveelutions all have a mega form could be really interesting but also a bit odd.

Endless stamina is cracked for one piece

I look forward to seeing where it leads then, and am happy to be back in the Vikings side again, cheers.

I love the story so far but this Eowynn part is infuriating, I will continue as the rest is great it’s just that part is to edgy and forced/cliche as anything.