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would have liked it better if it wasn't the Naruto system it honestly just seems lame to me, maybe its just me but with the unique premise of him starting in impel down i feel like the story could be way better. might come check out the story some other time and see if you can somehow make the story turn out good.

great story so glad the mc isn't some genius in everything from movie star, rock star, Olympic athlete. its nice that he's focused on once niche thing and is improving it and being somewhat more realistic.

got to chapter 300 and he ended up having kids idk why but when the mc has kids it just completly ruins the story for me from that point on some people might like it but not for me his relationship was alright went fron the love interest being in 1 or 2 chapters skip 50 or so and then another 1 or 2 then there married and have kids. she has a nice introduction but again not enough to where i could get connected at all still until all that was a great story liked the character and world building. (dropped at chapter 300)

gets boring after the later 100+ chapters becomes repetitive blackmail here blackmail there. fall in love, sex repeat every couple chapters. the fights are not entertaining, lemons are boring. dropped at 186 after skipping a couple chapters because of boredom. only cool part of this story is the eyes but that was it. would have been better if he didt have a pokemon harem and only focused on the ice queen, elf queen and first 2 girls, maybe focus on 1 or 2 more but instead its a new girl after the other and then forget about the other girls right after.

dont drop this

got boring real quick, the whole story is way to fast paste while the story moves along there is no real description of certain points. Example mc says were going to (this place) and (doing this) and then says something like but i already know how it to get past everything with precog or whatever like the premise of the story but like i said to fast and moves in to many directions at once that it gets annoying to read

good story really liked it

best streamer fanfic ive seen so far, its a great read and i hope you continue to update it. make sure to keep posting and updating looking forward to more adventures and romances, just make sure its not a pokemon harem (i like what you did with the HOTD world how there were lemons but they were not every chapter and was not with every girl there)

this story was great from the beginning then it just started getting way out of hand and making 0 sence and completly unrealistic at all

started reading since its been #1 and on top of webnovel since I've started reading on here and the reviews said it was top notch but was sorely disappointed mc is boring and follows along with everything like he doesn't have a mind of his own it started out good but went downhill fast idk if someone find his name out and don't want to anymore but the idea that someone can completely control his life if they know his name and cant lie just seems stupid to me made it to chapter 174 before drop

everything was good until 300s when he lost memories and became stupid not reading anymore

honestly good story made it to ch700 but just got bored of it mite come back some other time

story was great until the 500s and he went to find his family and finally confessed.at some point author stopped showing his stats as often so lost track of them. didn't like how he was tier 1 the whole time and beating tier 3/4 felt forced. everything about the story is so slow and the harem took to long to actualize had to skip chapters since i wanted to know if he actually gets to together with Bing idk after like 450 story became boring and had to force myself to read more since i was so far in but it became to much and had to drop it... besides that story started great and really liked Bai/Bing development