Badges 4
Moments 108
what a tough read this is, after waiting more than a weak, getting this mess of a chapter is such a disappointment. The tonal shift between epic and ominous to ridiculous Benny hill theme type shenanigans feels like writer just doesn't know what to do with his story so he's trying and failing everything at once. seriously I wish he would pick a lane and stick to it long enough for a natural conclusion, instead of undercutting the tension with slapstick humor, ruining his own setting and characters on the process, turning them into clowns and the plot into a circus.
"Let's not rush this, okay?" The Leviathan shrunk to his human form, holding his hands with the palms out in a peace gesture. "Things were said but no one got hurt so no harm no foul.
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
"the sparkling of metal, the shiny gems, the majestic elemental power!" - The Babies
As for the babies, they only say the sparkling of metal, the shiny gems, and the majestic elemental power. They giggled at the light show, almost forgetting about the soap bubbles.
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
what does it mean for the armor to be understated???
The armor was light, understated and did not restrain his movements at all. It also made no sound when he moved. Perfect equipment for someone who likes to lurk in the shadows!
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
for every pan there's a lid that fits
ch 2778 Due Process (Part 2)
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
shhhh... não expõe o legion desse jeito cara, daqui a pouco todo mundo vai perceber q ele parou de prestar atenção no que escreve faz tempo
"Dya." Elysia nodded, finding the matter ridiculous.
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
when author endengers children to move the plot forward so much that even the characters themselves stop taking it seriously
"Isn't that the same thing that always happens with Lith?" Aran countered pointedly.
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
I was rereading the novel, and I'm at the Ranger arc, where the courts are properly introduced. I gotta say, what a nosedive in writing quality this novel took. The courts were portrayed as individual organizations, each with their own views on the world and operation systems. Now they are just some scrooges that make me cringe when the author uses them to manufacture tension. It's so shallow it's disappointing. Vastor's evolution looks hype and all, it's a shame it got mixed up with the lazyest antagonists and most contrived scene to ever appear in this story.
ch 2776 Old Monster (Part 2)
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
maybe
At that point, he knew that unless the Guardians of Garlen decided to intervene it was over.
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
kid probably dies in agony
ch 18 Absence of Light
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
but his flaw was supposed to be the counterpart of a divine blessing. tell me, should it be easy to avoid?
ch 18 Absence of Light
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
you're wrong
ch 18 Absence of Light
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
the way author conveyed how Sunny's Flaw is applied was amazing, everyone that thinks otherwise is wrong. these scenes with the "oh cr*p" moments of realization how deep in s*it the kid is were WAY better than having it stated in a System message. it's 'Show, don't tell' at it's finest.
ch 18 Absence of Light
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
a laughed hard here
"What are you thinking about?"
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
is shadow slave or supreme magus older? are they ripping each other off or are they both plagiarizing some other work? because this is grounds for a copyright infringement if I ever seen one...
"As your soul core develops, the body gets rid of all its imperfections. So it's hard to find an unattractive Awakened, especially among the stronger ones. Live long enough, and you might just become a flower boy yourself."
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
almost
Mesmerized, Sunny almost missed the fact that there was a shoulder insignia on the woman's left sleeve. There were three stars on it.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
"did you get a true name?" -hahahaha imagine me getting a true name, that's a fertile imagination you have sir(did not lie, did not expose having a true name, did not sit there in awkward silence)
Flaw Description: [You cannot lie.]
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
as of now, it literally can't be more popular than it is in this platform
ch 15 Shadow Slave
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
get better soon. take a longer break if you need to, enjoy the holidays, man. I hope you get back at writing Supreme Magus with the passion that made it one of the greatest works of fiction in this platform.
ch 0 -1 Hiatus Notice
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20