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The story is good but the heavy slice of life is not my thing.. it does get u to feel more for the characters and gets in touch with their struggle but it's too much for a Superman fic

The story is good but next time just put an LGBTQ tag.. I managed to continue reading the fist time it happened and now he makes and clone of himself to have sex with... this is wrong in many ways.. And it gets complicated really quick I know writing super smart characters is not easy but come on you have to make it so we readers understand what he's doing.. I mean the dude even has a kid with himself and it's his 🤨 other clone??

I haven't read it yet so I'm not gonna judge.. but Rick would pretty much know when his grandkid is hijacked I mean it's Rick

I like MC villains but this...... the dude just do whatever he feels like and has a huge thirst of power.. If you think about not all of us who gets superpowers would be Heroes plus with the God complex it's self explanatory

honestly it's meh... I don't like the MC though.. The story just makes the MC get involved in almost anything marvel just cause he's got "plans" I mean come on being a speedster and one with the speedforce can cover pretty much anything. It does not have originality the MC is dumb and blames hormones

that makes him has basically no weakness ( Holly magic not included).. most necromancers have weak bodies and their main weakness is close combat

I'm with you there.. it should have just been a random Reincarnation , it didn't have to be a by a god. and the god even showed up at the beginning like why can't it be at the end of the book. And like the guy just showed up and be like " I killed you and brought you here you will work for me" and the MC be like "ok"..I don't like it when the MC is straight up being controlled If he chose so then it's no biggie but this Nah

I was liking it until the writing style change and it didn't have it for me anymore I mean yeah the story might still be the same but it changed for me.. it's one of those a story varied being told person to person

it's overall good the only thing I don't like about it is his rank that is still stuck like i expected him to like rank up faster heck even cultivation novels rank up is better than this and those guys go like 1 realm per 100 chapters..ohh yeah I don't like it when MCs reincarnate as a devil or a monster for that matter and still play nice the only reason why they are not killed for it is because they're the MCs it's just Nah for me... the overall story is great though and I like his cheat

I honestly hate it when In the "apocalypse" scenario they still group by countries heck they should do be a federation and be done with it.. what's great about protecting your country when the rest of the world dies

The dude literally has the world source as his power but fight for one particular group of people I mean in a way he was supposed to be the world's guardian