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SlySmile

male LV 4

As long as it is good plot, not abused plot armor spamming, and has good depth and character development I'll read it!!! 😏👍

2023-04-25 Joined Global

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[I meant, as a former human, reborn in the Dungeon as a monster.]

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

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'I wonder if throwing him into the Sacred Desert was too much. Evee mentioned that the Curses in the Origin Expanse have gotten stronger in the last few years. The Will must be overwhelmed dealing with the imbalance of the Origin.' 

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Fantasy · HideousGrain

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[They're centipedes…] I return, confused. [Do we need any further reason than that?]

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

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*motion -> mission

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*movie(?) I'm confused [img=nervous]

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Perhaps you mean *Status, go me confused [img=thinking]

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*role -> roll

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Ash looked up, "Breakthrough with [Iron Dragon's Claw]"

Pokemon: Radical Redux

Pokemon: Radical Redux

Anime & Comics · Katsu39

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*best -> beast

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*falter -> flatter

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[I dislike being treated like an invalid,] she shudders. [Those healers wouldn't let me walk unaided until I started hitting them with a stick. They didn't mind that I hit them, but they felt it demonstrated I was stable enough to move around on my own.]

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

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Lol, did the MC's IQ drop since he asked this question? [img=thinking] Did he just forget how devious and scheming people in power are? [img=thinking]

'Should I not trust him? I thought we were grateful for him protecting us and the Tritan Alliance.' He thought, only for Danny to sigh deeply.

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Fantasy · HideousGrain

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In short, trash woman was much more worried about her 'adult' 'baby' girl than her own 'younger' 'teenage' sons, their father also seems to forget about their own sons' existence as well, coz after all those years and the misunderstandings cleared, they didn't even bother too take them in and take responsibility for their abandonment, also, Hesta seems to have also forgoten about her own younger brothers... to summarize, Hesta is the only child that matters, the MC and his brother are mistakes they couldn't bother to take care of up until the point when Danny died and they had to take care of his soul for certain purposes [img=thinking][img=disgusted] Their family is indeed a prime example of a rotten one in my point of view since only one child mattered [img=angry] Lastly I really wondered what would have happened when the MC and his mom reunited for the 1st time and the MC didn't tell her that he the one she's trying to intimidate to death is actually her youngest child, would she had killed him if he didn't give that answer since she doesn't seem to feel any sort of blood relation between him and her furthering the point that she's a horrible parent [img=thinking]

"I thought that they were going to hurt you. I…couldn't return to tell you I had to leave. It would have exposed my home and your existence. I know that I could have stayed behind as well, but leaving Hesta alone with the Nest was not something I couldn't do either. Hesta might have been an adult, but she has always been my little baby. If I could help her just a little bit by being next to her while the Nest harmed her…I thought…"

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Fantasy · HideousGrain

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Pfft!!! Mommy stole their male prospect... 😂

"The one marrying our dear guest in the present, will be me, as for my daughters they will be engaged for the time being".

Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System

Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System

Fantasy · Barion_Trident

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"Hmm..." Mark nodded. "I get you. Even Naofumi's shield needed to transform so he could attack. A simple shield alone had limited capabilities unless you were skilled and strong enough to use it like a boomerang or bash it against enemies."

Mutagen

Mutagen

Sci-fi · Exallion

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*m'ussent(?) is this some kind of slang or accent? If not, then, -> "mustn't" or just use "must not"

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*smarted -> smartest

Articuno nodded and let Blanche climb on top, then they flew away. 

Pokemon: Radical Redux

Pokemon: Radical Redux

Anime & Comics · Katsu39

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*picked -> piqued

Naomi remained behind, lost in her thoughts for a moment, before her eyes locked onto the direction of the guest area, her curiosity was now picked, her sister has never found anyone in the same range of age to let alone make her doubt her capacity to win, but even fight on par with her, so it would be a lie to say she wasn't interested on it.

Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System

Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System

Fantasy · Barion_Trident

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