Mortimer_Darkbane

Buddy, I understand that as an author, you wanted to introduce some sort of romance. So you probably thought, "Well, I'm going to make a female character with a similar personality and mentality as the MC, and make them fall in love." But that's exactly the problem—you forgot your own MC. Someone like Lara, who has a similar personality to the MC, would only ever act for her own benefit. And you also made her a psychiatrist. So what the audience sees is a manipulative psychiatrist getting close to the MC using sweet words, slowly convincing this little brat that they’re the same. That’s the best way she could survive. Then, she gradually makes the MC give her the demon core, a safe place to level up, and even perfect protection. And in the end, we don’t even get proper revenge. All we see is the MC still whining like a baby over her death. Even after killing her, this idiot didn’t realize he was being manipulated.

But it was just pathetic. The MC was whining and shouting like a baby. Even until the end, he never realized that he was being manipulated by Lara. This little slave boy still thinks she loves him, lol. If it wasn't for the automatic summon, he wouldn't have even taken her out.

The author keeps forgetting his own story. In one chapter we saw Mc reaching rank 3. And after a few chapters we saw MC going into seclusion and coming back saying ,he had finally reached rank 3. Like bro, why the hell is MC reaching the same rank he has twice, the author really messed up. But the worst thing is, in the early chapters MC wasted literally 5 years to get all the life experience of a dragonic general, who was the leader of dragons. And 20 chapters later MC meet another sealed dragon, who said to full fill one of Mc's wish, and guess what he asked? He literally asked for the knowledge of that dragon, like bruh, he already knows more about dragons than this sealed up dragon. But he still waste the wish to know something he already knows. So yeah, this is an author that forget his own story and power levels

I have been looking at the novels recomended by you and they were good. It's really hard to find an actual evil MC novel, all oof them either have comedy undertone or useless romance. If you want you can check out "CURSED IMMORTALITY", its hidden gem in evil mc novels

I get that you're trying to develop the character and all, but just know your audience, bro. People didn’t read hundreds of chapters to see a typical antihero romantic MC. If you had plans to ruin the MC’s personality, you should have added the Antihero and Romance tags instead of the Villain tag. Just look at the other reviews , you’ll see how many people are disappointed by this so-called "evil MC" turning into an antihero. Just change the tags. It’s not that hard.

Just give a minor spoilers, did MC kill Lara? and the girl that bully him in school? If not this story is a huge let down

WARNING: THE MC IS A SLAVE AND A SERVENT TO A WOMAN NAMED LARA. MC IS ALWAYS MANIPULATED BY THIS WOMAN AND HE NEVER GETS FREE FROM HER . HE REMAINS A SLAVE AND A SERVENT TILL THE END. Another naive MC who thinks with his lower body. He risks his life multiple times to save random side characters, using the excuse that he wants them to level up. He doesn’t even seek revenge on the bully who tormented him during school, claiming that the bully has now turned into a good person. Meanwhile, the woman who repeatedly bullied and publicly shamed him is still alive, and this fool even risked his life to save her. The worst part of the novel is a character named Lara. She’s a psychiatrist who falls under the chaotic neutral category—the type of person who only cares about herself and will do anything for her survival and benefit. Initially captured by the MC, Lara manages to use her clever mind and manipulation to turn the tables. The MC, thinking he’s in control, is actually her puppet. Lara convinces this fool that she’s the only one in the world who truly understands him, and now he’s entirely under her control. It’s almost pathetic watching how the MC behaves. He believes he’s the one in charge, that he’s manipulating and controlling Lara, but the reality is the complete opposite. He tries to act smart but ends up looking like an idiot. Despite his supposed intelligence of over 16,000, he never demonstrates or behaves like someone with such intellect. Lara, on the other hand, takes full control. Since she’s physically weaker than the MC, she uses her acting skills to make this fool fall in love with her and gets everything she wants from him. This foolish MC even claims that Lara is just like him, bruhh.. that’s your first sign to eliminate her on the spot. His personality dictates that he should backstab allies or friends the moment they become useless (as he did with Paul), yet he completely fails to see through Lara’s manipulation. ANd just when you think it's couldn't get any worse, she again Manipulates the MC into giving her his hard earned demon cores and even made the MC give her multiple skills. She even manipulated the MC into creating a safe way she can earn xp and increase her own power, and what did the MC do? he just peovided her just that, like a pathetic slave he is. Then he serve her his limited food, and even guarded her like dog. In simple terms: The MC is a fool who has been entirely manipulated by a woman who wouldn’t hesitate to abandon or kill him if it benefits her. The novel is utterly filled with frustration and poison.

Why the hell does this novel doesn't have an lgbtq and harem tag? This novel has Harem, a big one at that. This novel has gays This novel has lesbians This novel has LGBTQ bs This novel has NTR This novel has pedophilia This novel has multiple s3xual scenes with minors, and an autistic minor at that. I am a guy who usually like evil MC, but bro pedophila? really?. What kind of fked up brain does this author has to write this bs.