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I see. You're right. Now that I think about it, even though he had his reasons, it's true that I ignored the fact that he was a person with two lives. The thing is, his first life didn't give him much wisdom either, since he spent most of it bedridden with cancer. Even so, I agree that I should have thought more carefully about the reasons for accepting that mission. I'll try to improve in the future to create better arcs. Thanks for the review and thank you so much for reading, I hope you enjoy the story!

Honestly, I understand your point. Ever since I planned Volume 2, that little arc was going to happen. But I couldn't develop it properly. I'll always feel that arc is bad; it didn't turn out the way I expected. Now, while Edward's father told him he was leaving, he didn't say where, and, as far as Edward knows, he shouldn't be able to go too far because he isn't strong. Edward thinks he might be working in the mines, which is why he went there. Second, you mention that he now knows several things about his father, and that's why it doesn't make sense for him to go there, because he's "much more than a miner." I'm pretty sure the information Edward learned in those arcs was from before Silas Merchant fell (which was many years ago). Silas himself mentions this when he asks him some questions and during his letter. Edward knows that his father was a strong man in the past, or at least he suspects it, because he only recently learned this. Furthermore, he also knows that his father is NOT strong now. And well, regarding him ignoring the warning signs... Indeed. It's partly necessary for him to make mistakes to grow, isn't it? Humans often ignore warning signs, and it's afterward that we learn. Or should I make a perfect path where he notices all the signs and makes no mistakes, where the mistakes aren't his, but someone else's? I think the story I'm writing isn't about someone exempt from making mistakes. What I can assure you is that he learns from them.

Thank you for reading and leaving a review. May I ask what you mean by that? Are you referring to grammar/English or something else? I'd appreciate your feedback; it's important for me to improve.

I like the MC's personality; it's a pleasant read, and I also like the relationships they've shown so far, which I hope will be better developed in the future. I haven't read too much, so I can't say much, but it's a good story so far.