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Yeah, but his username? It was obvi so I expected it.

Ignoring the hate, ignoring the minor mistakes made by the human author, I liked it but the problem is...the fact he became so strong, so fast as if he needed to, and then the many powers didn't make sense because DC has WAYY too many things that can give Superpowers or buff simply put for example...*insert meme here*, just like the Flash, and have it, really try and capture the characters more like them, Bruce's "I can't trust anyone" but with his Brother still left, he might become "I'll do anything it takes, ANYTHING" just food for thought. Continue being great!!! P.S. Particle Accelerator.

Ignore these retards, if your comment is "OH M GOD ITS SOOOO BAD" then explain why? How? What can he do to fix it? Is the quality bad? These are what you should do....all this reader is above all and you should change your story because yes...just remember that you can continue writing and they can't stop you, ignore the hate because it's not real, it's quite probably a bot...just wanted to give my half...

I liked the idea but he's a bit boring, like I get it, who ~! Super speed, but can't we have a different plot maybe? Like same as DC just inserting random plots, or going to another world diff from Marvel/DC and starting from there but nonetheless, it's a great read!

A massive step up and has very nice English plus the characters are the same, yet with the 'first' OC it's very evident that the plot holes will be fixed. The mysterious entity which is clearly Barry's brain trying to shield itself from trauma, has a conscience of its own. Hopefully, it gets its own power, also Barry has defeated both the first villains without explaining too much which means that, it's clear Barry destroyed them. The interaction between him/her/it/they? is weird but as you look at it, it's actually how 'Anime' geniuses talk as they use substitutes for what they want. P.S. Subscribe to Patreon! -Madvocate/MauLer Fan

It was a Beauty. Don't take my word for it, check it out.