Laughing_Fox_9871

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You developed story development is great but world building need more information. overall it is going in right direction but you still need to improve the worldbuilding for that you can watch world building videos online on you tube but Great work keep writing.

MY UNRIVALED BLOODLINES

Fantasy · De_Prodigy

Laughing_Fox_9871

11mth

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You developed story lightly but world building need more information. overall it is going in right direction but you still need to improve the worldbuilding in it you can watch world building videos online on you tube Great work keep writing.

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Laughing_Fox_9871

11mth

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You developed story lightly but world building need more information. overall it is going in right direction but you still need to improve the worldbuilding in it you can watch world building videos online on you tube Great work keep writing.

Robin's Reincarnation System 0.1

Fantasy · Maxwell_Sekundes

Laughing_Fox_9871

11mth

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You developed story lightly but world building need more information. overall it is going in right direction but you still need to improve the worldbuilding in it you can watch world building videos online on you tube Great work keep writing.

Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn

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Laughing_Fox_9871

11mth

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You developed story lightly but world building need more information. overall it is going in right direction but you still need to improve the worldbuilding in it you can watch world building videos online on you tube Great work keep writing.

Heroic Gems

Fantasy · ZedCode

Laughing_Fox_9871

11mth

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You developed story lightly but world building need more information. overall it is going in right direction but you still need to improve the worldbuilding in it you can watch world building videos online on you tube Great work keep writing.

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