Webnovel Author: systemwriterK - Novel Collection

it s a good idea but for me the jail and the ultra long simulation is too much, whatever the case a jail in a cultivation world ? at least the jail of a little sect so there can be some movements or something and 30 pages for 24 h shows how tiring it is personaly, other may like it but fantasy makes you want to see brighter things not jails and cells. i mean i hope to see faster movement toward the story and not i cultivate in a cell until i kill everyone or i can finally teleport out. sad because the start was good with the old man thingy, can t you skip at least a bit ? i hope that helps for a rewiew i read so much books but i know it s hard to write one, guild wars was good i guess but jail it s too much. anyway good luck

you are so right never seen something that bad 20 chap for useless drama so boring no creativity 😐😔

may the water be with you, people like water but in every page ? sadge..

please be more positive, his life is too tragic before and after. this story is too dark for me

coollllll lolllllll ahaha

pandemic this that, tv programmed it suk

really good story need more plsssssszsss

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completed ? why stopping.. nn

even better than i thought please push it up

bro you just started with webnovel (lvl1) this is one of the best really, what world building ? we will know as it goes on it is just the beginning and it s useless to put useless descriptions. every book with high level world building is rare. at least put 4stars xD too harsh if you don t like it go to romance section and you will like useless world building so the mc feels above the world. it is just a translation so go to the one who wrote it and let us have fun with a good system :) ty

thanks for the good book ;) you deserve my praise ! 5 stars

build a game empire from scratch : on novel medium

ty didn t know this sitethe name is : build an empire game from scratch965 ch

who want bad raw?

need more ! pick it!!! good writing good plot luck