Atruesealenjoyer

2mth

Posted

Good novel even though I didn’t read it yet

Virtual Insanity: Cultivator In A Digital World

Eastern · Ryan_Saga

Atruesealenjoyer

4mth

Commented

"Oh my God, aren't these the same teeth as Toothless Boy? This is good. I like it."

Evolving into a Great Dragon From a Koi Fish

Fantasy · Eternal Dream

Atruesealenjoyer

7mth

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I feel you

Go Home: Worship Big Brother

Game Descends: All The Skills I Have Are Boss Skills

Games · Return

Atruesealenjoyer

9mth

Posted

Should have named the ability fake it till you make it but great novel so far keep up the good work.

Global Awakening: I created the system

Fantasy · Ghost_Worker

Atruesealenjoyer

9mth

Posted

This definitely has potential the premise is great and another thing is that it has no errors. Although it could use some work for pacing and development some character interactions seem a bit forced and fake. I know how much work people like authors put into this kinda thing, I definitely couldn’t put in the effort.

Butterfly Tamer in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Karme

Atruesealenjoyer

9mth

Commented

Nice writing it has little to no errors but it could be a bit slower paced. The interact ion between the mc and rose seems a bit forced but all around great writing.👌