I have not read a good book in a long time, very relatable even with fictional elements in it. I love how you use your words, and how you tend to paint emotions, the perfect pictures! Although sometimes you get carried away with your descriptions, i hope you'd reduce that. I can see improvements in recent chapters anyway, that's okay. Updates are kind of slow, i hope we start getting it more now. Keep up the creative work Author!!!
Urban · Golden_Essence
Yeah i've been reading, i agree that sometimes i get lost, i tend to go back to read again. So far you've done a good job making it bearable to read, adding more excitement to it. I compliment your work, and i approve this book, it's really good trust me. Like Golden_Essence has said, you just have to be patient. It gets better.
Good writing quality, and very sturdy development. Everyone should try this book. Hopefully we get to see more. It keeps getting better and better
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I have not read a good book in a long time, very relatable even with fictional elements in it. I love how you use your words, and how you tend to paint emotions, the perfect pictures! Although sometimes you get carried away with your descriptions, i hope you'd reduce that. I can see improvements in recent chapters anyway, that's okay. Updates are kind of slow, i hope we start getting it more now. Keep up the creative work Author!!!
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Urban · Golden_Essence