lexi_Black

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lexi_Black
1 years ago
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okay, binge read. I have a small issue that shouldn't be hard to fix. Cassius became Marcus i think? also where did Bella come into play from Athena? minor spelling and grammatical errors but easy enough to read past. otherwise fantastic idea and story line. would like a bit more clearing on the timelines at play. some areas read as close together and then switch to months or years apart in the same sentence.