okay, binge read. I have a small issue that shouldn't be hard to fix. Cassius became Marcus i think? also where did Bella come into play from Athena? minor spelling and grammatical errors but easy enough to read past. otherwise fantastic idea and story line. would like a bit more clearing on the timelines at play. some areas read as close together and then switch to months or years apart in the same sentence.
okay, binge read. I have a small issue that shouldn't be hard to fix. Cassius became Marcus i think? also where did Bella come into play from Athena? minor spelling and grammatical errors but easy enough to read past. otherwise fantastic idea and story line. would like a bit more clearing on the timelines at play. some areas read as close together and then switch to months or years apart in the same sentence.
Moonlit Vows Of Vengeance
Fantasy · Fabian_6462