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HambinoRanx
male LV 13Discord Tag: HambinoRanx Discord Server: https://discord.gg/nfl (Yes it’s a sports server also) Military veteran with an explosive imagination, come join my fave server and learn to write with me.
2023-05-19 Joined United StatesBadges 7
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It’s okay, if you ever get to her growth arc you’ll find out how wholesome she is even more
"I agree for sure. See you soon, Ty. I'll have some steak finished soon, so don't keep me waiting much longer." Jade's voice carried a playful tone before she gave him the sound of a kiss and hung up.
From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
It is Ty's girlfriend, This is from Erebos Perspective.
Just as he was about to step into the portal, he heard the cry of a woman who seemed to be sprinting towards his location. Interest piqued, he turned around and noticed a short woman, around 5'3", dressed in night clothes, having long raven hair and a pale complexion had sprinted and dropped to her knees over Ty's dying body as she cried in pain and tried to get any kind of reaction from him as she shook his body.
From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
6”2 roughly,
"Because I've grown a bit since becoming a skeleton, and my body has sort of morphed. So, he must have started working on this after I returned," Ty explained.
From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
Anytime he uses a soul he takes on charactistics on that persons soul for a short time before reverting back.
Unexpectedly, Todd's eyes widened in astonishment as he caught sight of an enlarged version of Ty, his skin now tinted green, contrasting his once pure black complexion.
From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
Sasuke Mode
Ty queried, "Your former Boss made some intricate hand gestures before lunging at me. Tusandro did something similar before everything went black for me. What's the significance of these characters?"
From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
Yea it’s a great novel and was my first book where the hero’s failed and the villain won. 3 book trilogy, will be a great series, it’s also an audible book if you never have time for paperback
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From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
No I appreciate it, I’m still learning how to write and pace myself, so it’s a learning experience putting my thoughts and ideas onto paper, One of the main reasons I began writing on WebNovel is so I can become a better writer than ver time with real feedback so I can maybe one day pursue traditional publishing. I get a lot of motivation from writers like Brandon Sanderson and his power systems he created. I will give the wisp a look as well, I love a good novel, but if you haven’t read any Brandon Sanderson novels I highly suggest the mistborn trilogy, I took some inspiration from the FL of that novel.
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From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
Yea, I bet it’s frustrating, I never knew some of these issues were even in the story. So I do appreciate you pointing these out as you read them. This is my first time dedicating so much energy to a story, so I do apologize for the mistakes along the way.
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From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
I went ahead and added the extra paragraphs that were needed, I never even knew it got missed when I uploaded them. Thanks and sorry to ruin your reading experience
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From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
Ty ended up lodged in the mountainside after the intense encounter with the dark-cloaked man. After being hit with the massive purple bolt of lightning and crashing into the flat-bottomed land by the six pillars, he eventually propelled himself into the sky with his black flames, seeking distance from Thunderclap. However, the fatigue and disorientation from using his abilities caused him to pass out, and he crashed into the side of a snow-covered mountain, where he remained until he regained consciousness.
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From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
He has a starting goal for where he wants to go and above all else that's getting back home to his girl, She is in fact the FL who will have a lot of "Screen time" and growth, and she won't be on earth the entire time either. I know this platform has a lot of simply MCs. He's straight forward with what he wants and even rejects people trying to throw themselves at him.
Feeling a bit of grief seeing a woman cry, Ty asked, "Was that your first time down there in the human world?"
From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
This is fixed, Chapter 70 is the last Chapter I had an editor working on before I stopped, I realized they weren't doing proper editing. If you find anything after Chapter 70 Let me know and I will get it fixed up, I will also compensate you for these issues if you ever want.
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From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
I will take a look at this chapter tonight, thanks for the heads up
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From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
It’s more him inspecting who Ty is and once he realized he isn’t the person he is looking for he changed his stance. But clearly he is still suspicious of Ty and company as you will see in a bit :) Let me know if you find anything else confusing though so I can try and working on making things more clear and easier to read. I took your advice and slowed down just a bit to stockpile and work on bringing previous chapter up a bit. So if you do find anything let me know and it’s greatly appreciated. Also feel free to join my server if you ever have advice or want a self insert character as I’m working on a tournament arc
After a thoughtful pause, Ty responded, "I'm afraid I don't, but if you give me some of the info, I will make sure to let you know if I do. Does that sound fair?"
From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
General Mattison is warning Ty about a character who has much paler skin and has not harmed anyone despite having the capability.
After a thoughtful pause, Ty responded, "I'm afraid I don't, but if you give me some of the info, I will make sure to let you know if I do. Does that sound fair?"
From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
The Demon King is trying to figure out how to manage or reduce the pain Ty is experiencing from the flames associated with his powers. No, Ty didn't ask him a question; the Demon King was offering information and a solution on his own.
"I'm still trying to figure that out right now as well, however, I believe if you force your soul to rest, we will be able to minimize that. However, the pain from the flames still continues to slowly build up, even after I'm taking away half of the pain from you."
From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
Correct; my own spin on it that will evolve overtime
Elithira chuckled softly hearing Ty's words, "Father loves the entertainment the Mortal Realm produces. He even says that he might take inspiration from some of those shows from time to time. It really gets boring being unable to leave this place," her tone then turned serious as she continued, "If you must know, we derive our powers from Reiesencia. In fact, every living soul possesses Reiesencia to a certain degree."
From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
I fixed this, I hired an editor awhile ago and I didn’t realize how weird this was. I will look over the chapter and the last chapter a bit to ensure clarity
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From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
There are no accidents
Just as he got closer to the other end of the park, cutting through the stoplights, a voice picked up behind him, heavy and with a thick accent. "What is a mere human doing in MY barrier?"
From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
Yea becoming complacent is always dangerous
"I can probably cut through the nearby park. Sure, sure, sounds fine by me."
From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx