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A fantastic start with great characters and an interesting plot! I can't wait to see how the world-building will progress, yoojee knows how to create complex settings for her stories. Good luck, I'm looking forward to more chapters!

I feel a little strange leaving a review for the author I know irl, especially since we've worked together before on a different platform and she is actually a very good ML writer, but I feel like I kind of have to haha Already into 100+ chapters, the story has a very good flow and pacing. Every chapter leaves you wanting for more, but not in an annoying manner, yoojee knows how to write cliffhangers. The characters are amazing and well-written, the FL has a fantastic personality and still feels real and relatable. The tragic backstories of the main characters properly justify their actions and roles in the story. The plot itself is very interesting, the main idea behind the plot is something I've never seen before, so kudos for that too! Of course, some of the later chapters feel rather dry but the author explained why so I guess if you let it slide, you will not be disappointed by the further progression of the plot. All in all, a solid story with a decent amount of romance, adventure, human interactions, and, of course, mystery. If you are still having doubts about whether to read it or not, please give it a go, you will not regret it!

This is actually a pretty interesting start - two couples and two fake marriages, you rarely see this in romantic novels. Every chapter makes you root for the main characters, so I hope you will keep writing

I'm being super honest right now - the writing quality is superb! So my cup of tea. Everything is described so neatly, and I always appreciate a good reincarnation story, I'm going to keep reading because it's simply that good [img=faceslap] Btw, Li Na is my favorite name for a FL, I don't even know why lol Anyhow, I'm going to keep reading, I really like this novel.

Wow, the writing quality is great, I'm positively impressed! Whenever I see a well-written piece of text, I automatically give 5 stars just for that haha The premise is interesting, the pacing runs smoothly, and although there are not enough chapters to judge where the story is going, each chapter leaves you intrigued. Keep going, I wish you and your book all the best!

All I can say after reading this is "Aaawwww", the ML is just so adorable! The FL is also nice, true Alpha vibes. The writing is decent, and the story reads "smoothly", which is a big plus. Keep up the good work, author, I wish you all the best!

Thank you!

Thank you for the kind words

This is my second vampire story today, I feel spooky haha I like the mysterious atmosphere around the setting, loooove the FL's name, sounds so powerful! She is also funny and clever, looking forward to her character development! The writing and story pacing is also good, I wish you all the best with this novel [img=recommend]

Thank you tons

Interesting start! Vampires are usually not my thing, but it's refreshing to see a FL with such abilities, especially since she's actually proactive and straightforward. The writing is good, although sometimes there are too many dialogues happening at the same time, but if you keep writing, you will make a lot of progress in no time! All in all, a good story with a lot of potential, so keep writing, and good luck!

Thank you for the review!

Hunter ID = immediately reminded of Hunter x Hunter which is definitely a plus cause I love that manga lol Anyway, Interesting premise, well-written characters, good pacing. Update a little more regularly if possible, and I hope you will get a lot of attention for this story