Meant to be broken.
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Fantasy · PEARL_WANG
Won't he get in trouble for that though?
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Fantasy · CrimsonHelix
Adonis ignores his screaming and simply looks at the bag he stole from Vichon during his first attack. He opens it and looks inside to see about 150 mana crystals in a small space.
Fantasy · CrimsonHelix
Haha. A tatami mat replacement.
'This will be my first fight after I got my ancestor's legacy, let's see how strong I truly become!'
Fantasy · CrimsonHelix
Gives Draco Malfoy vibe.
Vichon had three followers of his behind him.
Fantasy · CrimsonHelix
"Haha, seems you have lost your mind if you're talking back to me! Do I need to put you back in your place trash!"
Fantasy · CrimsonHelix
How should I pronounce this? [VI-KON] or [VI-CHON]?
"Vichon what are you doing here so early...?"
Fantasy · CrimsonHelix
dunno why I find this relatable haha.
Adonis didn't realize this and was just hopping around his room like an idiot.
Fantasy · CrimsonHelix
No more Ladon? I wanna see him more though.
1. The ability to enter his ancestor's soul domain whenever he wants. But unfortunately, the ancestor will no longer be there.
Fantasy · CrimsonHelix
I wish I wake up like this every morning.
Adonis woke up, but full of energy, unlike the grogginess he usually feels when waking up.
Fantasy · CrimsonHelix
I am loving this.
ch 0 1 Sudden Change
Fantasy · CrimsonHelix
Nice choice of title and cover. It fit quite well to the story. It started with a conflict from the get go. I prefer it this way. straight to the point. Though I have trouble remembering their names for now but I think the story has potential. I hope the author keeps up with this. The update wasn't so stable but I guess if the chapter was that long then it would obviously take longer to write. Anyway, a piece of advice, your grammar is okay. Easy to understand but your dialogue could do some work and also the way call the people. EX. Green robe lady Instead, you could give her a name or just say the lady wearing a green robe. Green robe lady made me think of a sentient robe that is green and at the same time identifies itself as a woman. It's weird in my opinion. But so far, you are doing good, author. Wish you all the best.
Poison Master: The Estranged Heiress
Fantasy · PEARL_WANG