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Lengthy chapters, but they're my type, as long as they keep me engaged. This story managed to do that quite well, Ace's past was relentless but nonetheless it was good. I'm sorry if I didn't provide any critic, I enjoyed this story and don't have anything to point out really. Keep working and honing your craft!

Thank you, I can't help but write long chapters, though I'm going to improve and make them more engaging. Appreciate the pointers!

Appreciate it. I'll try to deliver on the next chapters!

Appreciate the honesty. I'm glad the story kept you engaged. Thanks for reading!

I'm no professional reviewer, so there isn't much for me to point out. Characters, world, direction. All of the are fantastic. The world seems vast, and I can already see so much content to be explored. Characters show potential depth through the dialogue alone, and personally, Leo seems cool. Of course, the main character is well written from what I can see. Direction of the story looks extremely promising and I'm hoping it continues to advance and deliver well. All and all, I had to talk about what the contents of the story since the way information is shown really intrigued me. Keep writing this story, I'm already a fan!

Thank you c:

Glad you enjoyed the book. Thanks a lot, these pointers will be useful for me. I'll try making the descriptions shorter!

This story kept me engaged throughout 5 chapters consecutively. One plot reveal after another keeping me hooked throughout the progression of the story, personally it was so well-executed. Great story, I'm hooked and I hope you continue updating it!

I'm happy and bummed. Happy because of how great this novel is, and bummed because I can't read it all. This type of novel appeals to me so it was already an easy hook for me. Amazing work!

Though I should say you need to update it more!!

A good read, I won't get into spoilers territory but I'm satisfied with how you handled it up until now. Anyone must give this a chance. Keep up the great work!