Fish_Incognito - Profile

Review after 100+ chapters read, as spoiler free as possible The story is excellent. You can tell that the author has put in a lot of time and effort into building their characters, the world, and the evnts that happen. They take an unusual approach, choosing to write from the current character's perspective. You'll see things as they perceive it. If they don't know, you don't know. Volume one gives a gentle introduction and tells the story of a young couple as they make their transition into society as adults. Personally, it invoked a lot of memories and feelings I hadn't recalled in years and was really refreshing. Many of the thoughts, dreams, and worries were relatable and well conveyed. When we get into volume two, there's a lot of unfamiliarity, but that's intentional. The world is just as full of mystery to the reader as it is to the MC's and as they grow to understand it, so do we. As the story progresses, we see the characters grow and the world be pieced together. There's a lot of tension that builds until the plot reaches a climax for that arc. Questions eventually get answered, but more arise in their place. Overall, it's a pleasure to read. There are grammatical errors and word selection and sentence structurings that I don't agree with, but for a budding author, they're doing a wonderful job. They've been releasing chapters daily for several months and show no sign of slowing down. I highly recommend this.