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Moments 7
“We haven’t seen the since” - them?
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Maybe a missing period in the last sentence?
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Crist = Cris?
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“I find something else to eat” - idiosyncratic dialect or should it be I’ll?
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“Held no hit” - should it be hint?
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Using a dumpster as leverage… there’s a sermon there.
Sel found himself at the end of an alley, near a dumpster. He wasn't sure how he got there, but waking up in this particular dark, dank alleyway was actually a blessing. He knew the owner of a restaurant whose back door faced the alleyway, and that man had been kind to Sel. His head was pounding, and he was weak from hunger and dehydration. He hobbled to his feet, using the dumpster as leverage. After an appropriate amount of stretching and popping various joints, he shuffled toward the back door of Rob's restaurant.
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Love the connections established between characters here. Sel and Cris, Sel and Rob, Cris and Rob - all dysfuncitonal but really genuine.
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