Thanks for the review. I do plan to rewrite the chapters. Also, this seems a bit unneeded but English is my second language and I am using Grammarly to help me correct my spelling.
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Asbeel is the angle of ruin, so the skill is part of the virtue system.
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The time thing is a power not related to quirks.
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Why did you write nuns?
I could see my long arms, covered in an exoskeleton, my sharp claws... Wait, what the fuck am I looking at?
Anime & Comics · VeganMaster
The writing is very dry. It starts with a action scene were the writing is practically tone deaf. The abyss mages being able to follow a car through tire tracks left behind is stupid. And the dream part is just. The twins are evil and want something.
I can summon Genshin Impact Characters
Fantasy · Joyful_Abyss_Mage